please write some more. it's getting good.

Please update this awesome storyyyyyy! I love it!

So much suspense!

awright! so interesting! please update soon :))

I LOVE THIS CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 3!

This is going to be a great fanfic, I just know it. I loved how you explained Izaya's and Mikado's past and how they got separated.

I hope that Izaya welcomes Mikado back with open arms, and what I can tell from the prologue, is that Izaya does just that. I mean who else would be on the other line of the phone, worrying about Mikado.

Well, update soon, I absolutely love this story, and it's only been two chapters!

Updater soon!

~Ayame

Your story is very well written. You handle the time jumps well, giving us just enough information about the past to be mystified and intrigued, and make us eager to learn what will happen in the future. I hope you decide to continue this story!

really enjoyed the story so far~

please update!

More please? -hopeful look-

This is really interesting and I like it so far.

Yumi

I really enjoyed this. I love the idea of Mikado being Izaya's younger brother... O.o Wait...was it Izaya who Mikado was talking in the first chapter? Heheheheh, overprotective Izaya is fun to watch~ :P

But Mikado's mom seems a bit...odd? ( _ _ Aka, CREEPY.) Is their father still around? (Curious xD) Or is it just Izaya and Mikado?

I can't wait to see where you take this~

~Fabia

This is pretty good. I like the concept, though it's a bit eerie for brothers to wind up together...I've read worse things, though, so I'm not opposed to it.

The only 'language' issue I can see is that you keep switching between past tense and present tense at odd times, so you may want to watch your verb tenses more closely in the future-if you're writing mainly past tense, keep it all as past tense, and if you're writing mainly present tense, keep it all present tense. In your story, that would seem to be past tense, unless you want to write flashbacks and things in present tense. Basically, just pick one and stick to it. :)

Otherwise, this is quite well-written, better than what I see from a lot of native English speakers, so definitely keep writing, and please update soon! (I think it's well past the Secret Santa time...)

Good luck, hope to see an update soon!

I think your story has an interesting premise so I hope you'll keep writing and updating. :D Can't say I don't also enjoy more of the Izaya/Mikado pairing, too. Looking forward to reading more of this fic.

Tottally love it! Great story, interesting plot and the best available pairing in durarara:) Can't wait for the next chapter

FAV

Kyaaa! XD Ooh! This is super interesting! I can't wait to see more of this. Oh, do please try to hurry. It seems like this'll be a lot of fun to read. Xd

Nuuuu don't end there~~~~ I wanna read on (

I'm really a fan of the Izaya and Mikado pairing, and your fic is one of the few that has it... And and it's AU, interestingly enough, which puts a different spin to things. Your fic is definitely unique, and I hope to read more of it soon 3

Thanks for writing!