I know this is a deadfic, or complete... but man would I like a continuation ;v;

nxt addition pls...

Update this...PLEASE! I BEG YOU! m(_ _)m
I need to know what happens next ;A;

update update update update UPDATE!

UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY!

This hardly had enough reviews~ So I shall post one. I think that this is a lovely opening chapter to a story, and I am actually really interested to see what is going to happen in this story. I hope that you continue writing and update soon! ;D

This seems intresting.. I enjoy your style of writing, can't wait for the next chapter :)

wow nice story

Is this going to be a multi-chapter? It looks really good. Please continue.

OMG! Cute 3 I really want to see where this is going! I love the plot and its awesome! Keep it up! :)

Hmm interesting.

Hey. I like this.

I think this story is deep and heart-touching, although it's just the prologue and it's even rather angsty (which isn't really my cup of tea)

I know though, that Atoli does have an angsty side, considering her offline condition, so I adore your work on making this quite in character :)

Well, I'm looking forward for the next chapter.

I prefer happy plot and ending though, so I just can hope you won't make the stories too dark-ey. Haha :D

Keep on going, thanks for the chapter, and see you! ;)

Keep this story going it's really good I may not have enough to be a critic yet but I can tell this will be a good story

a very good story so far and I hope you'll update soon this is getting good really quick, so till then see

please update soon i still dont have enoguth materiol to form a good review of this but soo far you are making it very good!