Nice lil' story (:

I would have been one of those people on the platform with wide-eyed expressions, but with something extra. My mouth would by open, my eyes would be full of stars, and I would have a nosebleed.

3 Loved it(Not in the creepy way)

Also nothing that you write is completely disturbing.

Hahaha, smexy, too bad the stop came so quickly XD

FUCK. *FANGASM*

That is all. XDXD

~A.A.

P.S- I LOVE your fics!

xxx

Yaoi-san- O.O I wanna be one of those sick fuck and watch Matt and Mello! *drools*

Minty-chan- Well, I certainly feel like a sick fuck, imagining something like that happening on a train I was on...Oh god, how awesome would it e if I got to see them...*drools*

NIIICE! I love the old have-someone-scared-by-seeing-unexpected-sex thing but you, my friend, have taken it to the next level by letting MULTIPLE someone(s) see them XD and although it didn't quiet get to the yummiest part, Yay for Seme Matt! so yummy (even if the train seemed to be a damn Japanese bullet train) _

:) smiles all around. Although, if i was on of the people waiting for the train, i woundn't have been surprised. I mean its Matt and Mello. But seriously. I loved it. (:

I wanted them doing it :P Especially with matt so damn needy over there XD

what about the word :P doesnt it ring a bell on your ears? :P

Uh... I'm not complaining but... *cough cough*... Shouldn't you change the rating to M? ...Uh... Go yaoi!

this was indeed amusing,i liked it even though it was boarder-line M(in my opinion) i liked it. nice job :D

i was also proud of myself for reconizing the title refference XD

-andy