That..fricking...twist...

Just want u to know I’m screaming about secret merthur shipper Uther in this year of our Lord 2020

I LOVE UTHER.

*DROOL*
And, Uther...what?! HAhahaha amazing!

Great!
I love this Merlin! And this Arthur! Not to say that they are staying form the original characters, just the way that Merlin reacted when Arthur found out...it's the way I ususally imagine it (but not in the stocks xD)

Wow did not expect that st the end with utter :') good job

I love this story！！！！！ - It's so exciting
I am a Chinese and I haven't read any fictions about Arthur and Merlin in English before，but there are many Chinese like AM very much！！Some of them are good at English ，so they asked the authors if they could translate the stories into Chinese. So am I would like to ask you if you'd like to give the accredit to let me translate your story－The stocks. I have just sign in and could not to send PM to you，so I write this in the comments. I wish you'd not mind. If I can, I will give you the URL of the translated text and give clear indication of the author and the URL of your fiction to the Chinese readers. Anyhow I hope you will reply to me what's your decision and continue to write more stories ：）

Okay, that last bit was slightly creepy XD

HA! Good ol' Uther...

hehe, uther is a sneaky old man. his methods are a bit rough, but it does the trick;P

Can there possibly be more chapters involving super hot sex between these two with super amazing dialogue that gets me so hot and bothered like this one just did!? Please! I need more super hot Arthur-Merlin sex!

Uther knew?
dude thats so not right
funny
but so wrong
:P

This story was brilliant. Loved it. Very cute and very funny.

Such a hot story. Really, I love how considerate they both were of each other. :)

Awesome! Really well written i loved it that arthur was sweet and rough both! This was really in character and realistic. I'll rec it!