Wow. So Near is outside of the loop?

I've lost what to say..
This is good. Especially Near's part.
You sure are an amazing author -w-

This is beautiful, thank you.

Very well written, and unique. I liked it.

Wow. Wow. Wow. This was really amazing. Well done. :)

I swear you were one of the original writers of death note. You're too good.

Beautiful.

Simply beautiful. The imagery and the italicised sections that link the paragraphs are simply gorgeous. The idea is fascinating and I really think that this is wonderfully executed. Brilliant job!

Fantastic, loved every word of it

Oh my god. Cameron, I love you. :D I don't think I've ever gotten a more awesome birthday present. (Okay, Les Miserables tickets. But this is a close second.) :) .

I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the way you represented all the different characters, especially Near's section at the end :)

Wow. That's wonderful. Speechlessly amazing. It just captures Light in so many different ways that ... wow. Not that I particularly like Light, but this was still completely amazing. (Also, happy birthday midnight-elise ) But perhaps you should leave it at the second last line? I especially LOVE Near's part. 8D

Wow. A very powerful fanfiction. Wonderful work on it. Very detailed~