Very well written and interesting take on Sarah's reaction to the whole baby topic. I can see why Chuck was so unhappy of the idea of Sarah getting pregnant by Bryce. I kind of cringed at that too and like him probably would have preffered it had been another mark as opposed to someone they both have a history with. Anyway, you did a great job with this and i really enjoyed it.

Very well written. You did a great job of framing your story as a believable reason for why Sarah reacted the way she did at the end of Suitcase. I think you deftly dealt with a sensitive topic and the harsh reality of the spy life.

Dramatic certainly but I think the real reason is because she's moved around a lot and did a lot of crime with her father and she's probably thinking. What type of life would she give to a child, what type of mother would she be.

Thank you for handling this subject with grace, compassion, and most importantly, with the understanding that abortion isn't something that causes a woman to be scarred and afflicted for the rest of her life. It's one of the best treatments of the subject in fiction (hell, in non-fiction for that matter) that I've ever read, and that's even including professional writing.

Good they cleared that up.

Interesting look into why Sarah panicked.