Naruto destroys the hollow in one attack and afterwards soul reapers show up questioning him on how he has a zanpakto and how he killed a hollow if he had no training.

What happens next please update so I can read more

Great story mate, but when are you going to post the 3rd chapter?

Please continue.

... Well, okay. Not a bad idea for a story, though I won't hold my breath for an update. I hope it does soon though.

interesting!

UPDATE SOON! (_)

I like the Kiyone and Isane storyline, I'm looking forward to seeing how the story will evolve.

Having said that, 2 chapters in 2 years? 3th one maybe next year? How am I supposed to follow this story like that?

I'll put the story on alert, but I really hope you'll update more regulary... :(

lolz, mood ring zanpakuto, eh? Can't say I've seen that before.

And I do so love crossovers... Here's to hoping this one will be good. It looks promising thus far.

a hollow?

This chapter was really good with him spending time with Isane and Kiyone. Looking forward to him living with these two and keep up the good work!

This Houshi guy seems interesting with him being a wanted Shinigami who wanted to help everyone in the Rukongai.

great frist time ive seen a pairing with isane so keep going i want to see how it turns out its good so far

I have to say, I'm really liking your approach with this crossover. Usually with Bleach/Naruto crossovers it has an over-powered Naruto with a female or male Kyuubi as his Zanpakutō spirit followed by breezing through the Shinigami Academy, and going into the Substitute Shinigami Arc with very little plot development. Having a young Naruto showing up in Rukongai with no memory how he got there allows him to have a fresh start, which helps to bring him in more with the Bleach universe, and all of the people and experiences he has there to make him a part of their world.

Isane and Kiyone are two Bleach characters that are very underused, and it's good to see them more in the forefront of this story and forming bonds with Naruto.

Naruto's natural dislike for the Shinigami has it's merit, here is a group put in charge of the pluses, purifying Hollows, and performing Konsō on the dead, but they seem to ignore what happens to the pluses once they reach Rukongai unless they have spiritual power enough to join the 13 Court Guard squads.

The Shinigami live in relative safety behind the protective walls of the Seireitei, while the pluses get attacked by bandits and sometimes Hollows. If Naruto were to join the Shinigami, I doubt that old Yamamoto would allow him to create a squad to defend the Rukongai from any threats, and would most likelu call it a waste of their resources.

With the system the Shinigami setup, the only way to make changes from the inside is for Naruto to bump the old man out of his position as Head Captain of Squad 1.

Another way I could see changes happening in Rukongai is if Naruto becomes a revolutionary of sorts, and gathers all the former Shingami together to do the job the Seireitei couldn't be bothered with.

He would still need training, and seeing how she wasn't a big fan of nobles.(Even though she is one.) I would say Kukaku Shiba would be an excellent teacher for Naruto. Her skills are diverse, and she's good at Kido. It would be good if she was the same age as Naruto, Kiyone, and Isane so they can relate to each other better in the story.

Kukaku could be their insider within the walls of the Seireitei, who could let them know the patrol schedules of the squads and whatever information they will need. Being a noble and a girl with a firecracker temper, they wouldn't question or mess with her when she does ask someone questions.

I'm like your pairing Naruto/Kiyone/Isane. If you decide to go with my idea regarding Kukaku, could you add her to the pairing as well? She would be the only addition that would be needed. I always liked her in Bleach, and felt that they did a disservice to the character by just putting her in filler episodes after the Shinigami Arc.

I was thinking on your dilemma in regards to a working title for your story. Here is one that I came up with:

"Blinding Light Of His Trust" (I did a search on FanFiction, and couldn't find another story with that title.)

I'm looking forward to reading more chapters of your story. :)

want more soon

I enjoyed the chapter.

The chapter seems fine to me.

I don't see anything that needs to be fixed.

Keep up the great work!

Great update! Rather looking forward to seeing how he likes living with Kiyone and Isane, and what this changes about all of them and the storyline.