| Reviews for Immortality |
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   Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 4/12/2017 oh my gosh. my heart sunk. oh wow. so beautiful and so lonely. oh Vegeta. |
| Tjay M chapter 1 . 12/22/2015 I get it... She has her mothers eyes... He's sad because he will never get to look into those blue eyes again. Interesting. |
| Amazing girl 55 chapter 1 . 12/10/2014 I can't believe it from the minute I read the summary I expected it to be Bulma. |
| dch448 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014 It doesn't work. It's a great story, but the twist doesn't match. Vegeta was never enemies with Bra, not did she invite him to live at CC. That was Bulma. Change but a word, and this story would incredible. |
| Ermilus chapter 1 . 9/23/2013 Wow |
| XanaduHawk chapter 1 . 7/15/2013 BRA?! Damn, I thought he was talking about Bulma! |
| Emissary of Shadow chapter 1 . 4/25/2013 I...I... I love this. I just love stories that are so filled with emotion. I'm just wondering... 'Bra.' Wait what?! Shouldn't it be Bulma?! |
| Reika76 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013 Why Bra? Are you talking of Vegeta's wife? Vegeta's wife is Bulma. It's like he's talking of his lover and not his child! |
| Coofis chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 Wow...the entire time I was absolutely sure it was Bulma's funeral...what a twist...this was so emotional and touching. A definite shocker by the end. And absolutely worthy of being listed on my "Favorite Stories" list. Very, very well done. I commend you. |
| vegetas savior chapter 1 . 6/18/2012 Damn! I will never listen to evanscene and read a sad story again! I am totally bawling my eyes out here! Keep it up! |
| smothchap chapter 1 . 6/4/2012 This was indeed a precious story about a love of a father and daughter. Bravo! |
| Unknown Reviewer chapter 1 . 3/19/2012 Wow, I really liked this one (sad, but good writing I mean). However, I have a feeling you were talking about Bulla/Bra and not Bulma, yet you had mentioned the part of Bulma inviting Vegeta to stay at C.C. Was that on purpose to make us think you were talking about Bulma or was putting 'Bra' a typo? |
| Chikara-san chapter 1 . 11/4/2011 Whoa. Sneaky. I had to go back and read it again to pinpoint where the shift happened. Wonderful job. |
| KayuraK chapter 1 . 8/13/2011 That actually got me teary eyed, I'd thougth for sure it was Bulma's funeral right up until the end. |
| Raspberry chapter 1 . 7/9/2011 "Those eyes that he would never get to look into again…those eyes that were gone forever." Now I understand what you meant when Vegeta thought the phrase above. Bulma's eyes are really gone, now that Bra is dead. It's really sad, with Trunks / Bra gone. It is indeed true. Kudos to you though! |
