Reviews for Where the Lines Overlap |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH NO IT ENDS THERE? THIS IS BY FAR THE WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER. IT FEELS LIKE I WAS ENJOYING A REALLY NICE MOVIE AND THEN THE PLUG IS PULLED OFF And its already 2019 too :((( Pls make a continuation tho if you can ;;; |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my lord... This was a great story and I wish there was more. |
![]() ![]() Really liked it! It's so difficult to find billyxrebecca fics ( Please could you think about doind another chapter? |
![]() ![]() Please make another Chapter this was so awesome! |
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![]() ![]() That was good, you should turn this into a mutiple chapter fic it would be nice to see if she decided to stay with Billy and leave her fiannce or if she stays with her fiannce and is only with Billy for the one night. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! Their characterizations were perfect as was the way you aged them. I honestly can't wait to read the fic that this goes along with. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this. "Sure, sure princess." "Don't call me that." "Alright doll face, whatever you say." This part cracked me up xD Billy and Rebecca are both wonderfully in-character. I'm definitely off to read your other story on them now. Instante favorite btw :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, so sweet. I love it! True love is never really over |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, this is so awesome! How are you gonna get out of this Rebecca? Oh Billy, you confident bastard, you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh noes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet story. Billy was described so well here. The sexiness was just oozing with your words. :) Okay, ahem, I think I'm going to stop drooling now, lol. I like the premise a lot. I also feel that in their time apart, Rebecca ends up finding someone else, only to realize much later on that she can never replace Billy. It's like a little part you just can't let go no matter what because you never gave it a chance to see where it would go. Unfortunately for Mr. Ramirez, it seems that the ending indicates that Rebecca wants to discover the 'what could have been' in her fiance's absence. I do hope you expand on this story. The ending left me wanting for more, particularly finding out just what happens at Rebecca's condo...after some wine. Oh, and good job balancing Rebecca's innocence and maturity with Billy's aggressive bad boy nature. They're such dynamic opposites, but that's why they work so well as a couple. I enjoyed this little piece a lot! |
![]() ![]() What an unfair way to end it. I wanna know what happens between Becky and Billy! Dx The hints of sexual tension between them are great. Add more please? :O |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very nice. Very nice indeed. I'd love to read a follow up so I'll subscribe to you and hope and wait you do one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you going to continue this? I hope so. This is really good. You got rebecca and billy's personality spot on! :D |