I just... dear Jesus, don't give me so many FEELS next time! Why did you have to give me so many happy feels, just to give me that sadness? It's... unbelievably effective for getting another favorite. Good story.

'In a world of darkness, he's the only beautiful moment left.' Oh god I've read this fic a few times and that line still gets me, especially after the ending T_T Great work xx

WAT
WAT THE FFFAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWKKKKKKK
WHY
WHYYYYY?
SO BEAUTIFUL BUT THEN SAD AT THE END
WHY DID U DO DAT TO ME SENPAI?
I AM CRYING I HOPE YUR HAPPY

omg...this is sooo freaking sad...damn...but it's beautiful as well as the paintings on a butterfly's wings...I love this line though..." Ezio was in love with Leonardo " freakin' favourite!

D: after I read that last line I was successful at holding back tears after reading the reviews I wanted to cry it was like I got punched in the face by my own iPad D: that was the saddest thing I have ever heard and it was so adorable D; I need to read something cute and fluffy now ); it was really good tho (; is still crying btw

I can't believe you did that to me. ; ; It was so beautiful, so wonderful... And now, I'm crying. D; Meanie. Make some cute fluffy awesomeness so I can stop bawling. ; But this was really good... I'm just... *bawls*

That is so beautiful. I love the way you weave a poetic lyrical quality into your writing, and it really does make me feel like I'm in love. God, I needed that. I don't ship Shaun/Des, but now I feel like I should. I was smiling the whole way until I read that Shaun had died. That just ripped a hole in my chest; this story is going to haunt me the rest of the day.

Thank you.

That last line kills me. Oh, this was wonderful and the dialogue between those two was perfect.

Oh my gods! That was - :O I wasn't expecting that. -clearly hasn't played every AC game and can't actually remember the two she's seen played through- How did you make something that should have seemed angsty with that end seem fluffy nevertheless? ...Never mind, I'm about to start ranting. I loved this. It's well written and I didn't have to struggle to get what you meant. The format confused me for a second, but it's easy to get used to. Done gushing now. XD

Beautiful story, just perfect in every way... Like everything you write, its almost too good to be true.

~Vithian

No! Shaun is dead! :(

Such a sweet story though.

WHAT! NOO! The ending was like something reached out from my computer and punched me in the face and then spit in my eye. WHyyyy is he deaaadd after such a sweet and heart touching little story I found out he is dead. :( Only such a well written story could touch me so and yet ouch my heart.

Oh my God, I actually had to hold back tears reading the last line. That's such a heartbreaking ending to a lovely, fluffy one shot.

My family are looking at me so weird right now...

Thank you for giving me an excuse to procrastinate, and making me cry in the process. That's always the sign of a good story.

Gráinne xx

awww how could you ;( but i loved it, the story was so sweet, you protrayed the emotions very well. Good job

D8 I'm Gonna Cry Now! It Was So..happy Then...*BOOM* I'm Crying Now!I Know What That Feels Like Though...A Before During And After...My Love Isn't Dead Though..Just Far Away.. GREAT JOB! D