| Reviews for Man down |
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   RenesmeVivio chapter 1 . 3/7/2014 Sniff, Sniff oh my god you killed Takashi, this so horrible T_T. But honestly your story is fantastic I can't believe it I love it right more like these but less dying haha. |
| The valkyrie goddess chapter 1 . 4/6/2013 can believe i read this, the storie was good but takashi coudnt die |
| Draconos13 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013 OK, wow. Just WOW. I have read this story a few times and by God, it wrenches my heart each time no matter how much I know about it prior to reading it. Excellent writing skills, my friend! I understand your pain at having to kill off one of your favorite characters (doesn't every fanfiction writer?), but I hope you learn to appreciate the series-and yourself-a bit more. Keep up the writing! Regards, Draconos13 |
| Reverse Keyblade chapter 1 . 7/1/2012 Well done! I think the only minor qualm I would have is the phrase "Man who had become more than a friend". I believe you could have gone deeper into Rei's reactions. There's a plethora of writing in that itself - her friend with whom they had promised to marry each other when they were little, she dated, and that they were finding their way back to each other and she had realized how much of a leader he is and how far he is willing to go to protect others (Ep. 12). Good job though! |
| satomika chapter 1 . 3/16/2012 ow... although i don't like takashi dying, i think this one came out great... more rei/takashi, please! |
| ChordOverstreetFan chapter 1 . 1/13/2012 I've read fics where Takashi was turning before, but the last one I read had him get stabbed with a sword with blood from "them" on it - at least he was actually bitten here. I approve, even if I just got into this fandom. |
| Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 11/29/2011 Man what a story, loved it, emotion packed |
| Shirai Phoenix chapter 1 . 7/5/2011 You need to write a lemon with Takashi and Rei! ! YOU HAVE TO! That said, OMG! U KILLED HIM! But it was a really good story! In fact, I LOVED IT! Keep it up, paper-princess! Love always, PattyBHana 3 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2011 yea i still thnk takashi is badass but i liked it. |
| 0.o chapter 1 . 4/11/2011 Didn't turn out bad at all :D |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2011 Awesome story.. |
| Dante-SonofSparda-EX21 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010 *Sniff, sniff.* That was beautiful! Gahhh, why Takashi! He's too badass for that! But wait...why not? It would be more epic if he died in this fic, which brought out so much emotion out of me in the first place. So yeah, good job! You definitely brought out emotion out of me! You should definitely take a look at my HOTD fic, there isn't that many around so the word should be spread! |
