Interesting story. Loved it. Big kisses and hugs.

It was too good that i felt so bad when i finished

Update please

Nice one kid. Way to ask that out of the blue.

The idea was interesting. The mental pictures a bit repetitive. With darkness and same conclusions said over and over. Asamis growth line was best. He figured things without too much backforth thinking but with the rest it got a bit mental. Maybe thats how real life would work but it isnt enjoyable to read when characters ponder the exact same angle over and over again

Sounds odd the man could get into the apartment just like that

Thank you
It's beautiful story

great story! keep it up! but god how much i hated this harumi!

That very last part was sooo damn fking cute! It also broke my heart when akihito was bout to close of his heart too! Overall loved ur entire story! It was sad and happy and it just took me on an emotional roller coaster!

Again an amazing story... You're great, really... It's beautifully written, I'm happy that they noticed each other's value. I hated Harumi how can she be so stupid? I was so happy when Asami choose Aki over her. Keep up the good work.

that was great i love it keep it up

I just have an urge to review this awesome story!

Harumi is such a *****! I hate her with all my heart. Augh. How can you make Asami and Akihito like that? So frustating!

To be honest, everytime she tried to gain Asami's attention, I will curse in my bedroom. LOL my mom was mad XD

nevermind! This is good. So good. I shall fave this one!

THIS IS ONE GOOD STORY
it inspired me...

Omg. Asami's son is one awesome boy. YES HE IS UOUR STEP DAD NOW, LOL.

But man, the "Love doesn't last forever" part is tragic yet true. Idk why, but I love stories that makes Asami feel lots of pain. Like Takaba leaving him, etc. I kinda wish Takaba would take it further and did something with Sado, haha. Makes Asami even more heartbroken. OH! MAYBE YOU SHOULD MAKE A STORY WHERE TAKABA CHOOSES SOMEONE ELSE :O OMGGGG

Awwwwww I loved the end D it was sooooo cute. Hiroki is such an angel.

And of course you made me sooooo happy because Asami told Aki the 3 words he was expecting. It was a great ending. I totally love your fics.

Take care and I hope to read you soon.

Dazz