why end it here? I think it should continue, but amazing story though, I loved it.

it was cute but could have added alittle bit more

Me again . That was great . If you don't mind I'm making this into a book . Always an enjoyable read . I hope you write more . Adios amigos . Buenos nochees .

Great . Tommy and Kimi married would be even better . Sex is needed for those two .

wonderful, that is exactly how it would o happened

amazing

Awww! Not Bad Mate. I Enjoyed that story. I Think Tommy should have gotten with one of The Girls And I Like the Idea. Good Job. thanks For Posting.

Dan F

That was a nice, cute oneshot. Would have liked to have seen the parents' reactions though.

very good, especially for a one shot. It actually seems like a plausible aftermath.