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Ok, so I know I said I wouldn't read this, but tough luck kid. Despite what you said, chapter two isn't too bad at all (I don't know if this is the reposted version or not, but so what) - there are just a couple of points. Firstly, how does Rimmer figure out the other Rimmer was using him? Secondly - why turn Rimmer off? There is loads of scope for more story here, including interaction with the rest of the crew, and a mega excuse for much Rimmer heartache and angst as he battles with himself. Despite being off slash at the moment (as you well know!) this is good and I like it.

Gee you've got a few good idea's running here, ::reads further:: i few more thought's than i thought there were. Captured the idea's that would most likly be going through their heads really well. This is good... Zeralot

Ooh... we love the evil fic!

Not bad. Needs a lil bit of wrok but you've got Rimmer down pat. Look forward to seeing more of your work.

Er... I enjoy slash... but... well... it could use some work. Unless you're planning on adding chapters to it, this really needs some meat.

sorry, i've been doing a lot of lurking at the RDSS recently. Did I say lurking? I meant constructive listening... tee-hee-hee. Liked this one! Fab...

it's nice.

A good run of suspense for a while there as i read the first para, tis very good i must say.

Zeralot

Ee! More fic, and dedicated to me at that :)

Yay! More and more of this, please :)