I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

No, you sick a** fangirl. Just...no...

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! I've been waiting for forever! (I have no excuses for my own stories so I understand) I can't wait to start reading.

Lady Vanamisa, based on what I've read of this story, I believe I know where you were originally going with it. However, I request your approval to take over this story, I believe that l can give this story an ending that will both astound and satisfy readers in a way that is also unexpected. I am new to this site but I'd nonetheless like to end this story on a positive, yet surprising note. Of course,it is entirely up to you. Bare in mind, this is coming from someone who is interested in and impressed with your fanfic writing abilities.

Thanks for letting us know. I appreciate it.

Please keep the original idea!

gosh finally...

i like the ideas of 1,4,3,2 in order of preference.

Are you still updating?

Ya don't know if I love it or hate it. I love your mewtwo, hate what you are doing to Ash.

Cool story but if would be great if you could finish it!

This story is really good and I definitely want to see it finished.

Fantastic chapter:) Looking forward to your next update:)

I love it! Hopefully your still updating?

Please update this is super good and messed up. I feel for Ash, Pikachu, his mom, Mewtwo! I wanna see a ship so bad but I also want to Close Combat Arceus soooo bad...