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WHYD YOU HAVE TO MENTION NINA DDD;

ONG I READ THOSE COMICS TOO!

Yelling at kittens, handling them roughly, seductively dancing in front of the cats, typical OC appearance, her character is too unnatural its way too anime and not anything like this world its supposed to be based on.
I'm going to leave before your OC does more things to piss me off, Characters like yours are unnatural and do unneeded things, like who the Hell dances like that in front of kittens?!
Most of what I've read (I have only gotten to chapter 4) and she has proven herself as a mary-sueish characters who cannot properly care for kittens- her personality would fit more of a dog than a cat.

Anyway Im leaving and hopefully never coming back, sorry if I sound rude but geez tone down your character and make her more human and not a energetic mary sueish OC.

I thought Tobi was Obito?

Yes! Best. Akatsuki. Kittens. Story. Ever! ;D

Gah, sorry it took me so long to finish rereading this! Even though you both are no longer in middle school, I always check back here whenever I want to read something that cheers me up and makes me feel nostalgic...okay, not really, since I'm younger than both of you by a lot now... XD

I even freaking stalk the reviews to see who else is reading this... XD Gosh, you two are amazing!

Forever your fan,
- Tenshi-chan

Sorry! I totally forgot to log in when I posted that previous review! :(

Poor girls...well, hopefully, Konan comes up with something. I know she would, considering how close she's become with everybody over the course of those four months.

Nooooo! It's ending? I wanted more! Oh well...I'm going to go grab some tissues, though I could blast songs from Toy-Box, too... :(

If I were in the girl's situation. I would probably pull out a skillet and do a Kagami on Pein. No mercy.

Why did he have to die? I would have preferred to see him make up with everybody after everything, though I couldn't stop laughing about how Sasori apparently pulled the plug twice...

Nice chapter, it definitely resolved all of my questions! :)

OMG! So much drama...but at the same time, I'm a sucker for twists!

I hope everybody is okay, even Wyatt. He loved Shizuka too much, that's why...

Aye! How did my schedule get so flipping busy? I missed this story!

Poor Hidan...and Konan, too. I loved Yume's outfit...I even made fanart of it a couple of months ago! XD

Yes! I've been waiting for this moment to finally happen!

Hey, you did very well, Jordan and Zek. And should I daresay...
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...better love story than Twilight. *boom*

OMG, that was so cute! ItaKaga is probably my second or third favorite! I wish that I could have the experience...though I'd rather throw everybody in the water and die of laughter instead of kissing them. XD

Great job, you two! Sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while, Zek (I know that you can hear me, since I kept track of what you and Jordan posted on Kitty Karma...yeah, I kind of stalk this fic and the sequel for new reviewers XD), but school was so hectic...

This chapter was really good! Don't worry, Jordan and Zek, this was amazing, as always! But why does Wyatt's dad have to be a pedophile? Where's his mom?

Um...I don't know how to answer the question...(too innocent minded)