great story buddy, respect, thanks for this story, really emotional , i am happy to find people who like the luffy and robin pairings

more?

nice story

I really like this story. It had a lot of emotion into for just one meeting. I love how you portrayed Luffy. You captured his character perfectly, which is really difficult. Great job.

Great story

LOVEVLOVELOVE! This was so heartbreaking! You're very good with describing emotions. You had me at the edge of my chair when the elevator went down and Robin relived the happiest part of her life! Wow, so powerful!

o.0 interesting couple... erm.. i like the way u portray robin :X well, i doubt there's any ooc

well, lying instead of lieing

aww, we didn't get to see ace's gf :D

Well, it's not every day that one finds a LuffyxRobin story around here, so kudos for that!

I like how you depicted their personalities within the AU setting, but I think parts of it (specifically Robin's breakdown) felt a bit shoehorned. I think if you continued this, you could expand on her criminal past within this universe, and how it might catch up with her. Bad pennies are bad pennies, after all.

That aside, this was very well written, and definitely kept my attention. Good job.