100 times gravity. K

Great job please continue

Pure and utter garbage. Fuck you. And fuck your mother for spawning you. Wait...I already did. I remember emptying my balls into her after she wanted to get high and forget the regret she had for not aborting you. God your mother's pussy can whistle. Hey cocksucker, if you ever get a wife, send her my way. I'll show her how a real man thoroughly loves a woman. You should feel grateful that I'm such a nice guy to give such a blessing to your wife. You sending her to worship my cock would be about the only meaningful thing you did in your life. Shoot yourself. BANG

Please hurry with part 2

I don't know if you were actually trying to be serious with this fanfiction or make a horrible comedy

I mean, good idea terrible grammar? Idk what else to say.

it's like naruto had a weird dream after eating something weird before bed

what the hell happened in chap. 9

i wish thier was more of foxfire naruto bother of star fier will thier be more After chapter 16 i like that a lot pleas

oh damn... where to begin... this story is alright. I don't consider this an out of this world work, because of the fact that adding the bankai and other elements from bleach just out of the blue, and making no attempt at r&d or any kind of further character development so that these elements make sense is what turned me off as a reader. sorry, I don't think I'll be continuing on from here.

whan is part 2

whe Naruto buit his own tank car the hot rods boy took it and then it get hi jack by gom a boy like mad robo boy who had took over and ueds it to do bad thins too and when Naruto saw it it mack him so mad it back back old remleds of sske and he then took out his own car and gome say you fool you wll bund it up you own car and he say I NARUTO ASK foxfire get a new one buit up but you a evil little boy who took It will kown my furry up to 1000.00 no way out fool see you jack ass , he do it ,and the car when out like fire bund out , then the boy gome and the others 2 had lose both them reemon and the boys had lost tem clonds too him now , when in the big ones own shined and juket now and feel like he need go on the land now , he live in,

when Naruto had took the mob money form the ninja vaillge as will he buy out a bookshop he ueds as a home and some time he then had jinx in his home when the 2 took out the hive school out and when in bed with his woman te had sex with each other she say my Naruto you kown how to do it my boy and he had took down some big tme bad guys out too , when he and jinx move to the whipol couny to tookover it ,when in his office Naruto set to buit it up and when he do he took down others too and when the vaillge was home now nanaruto had sit on his throe chir with his wife jinx an then he took others with them sarkra ion tenten and the others as will having wokig with him too.

when in time Naruto had sarkrain bed with him and sex was good too ,when in the empine Naruto and sarukra had buit up took over dc eath then most of other remles too ,when inpower he had srkura put out and his 2 wife a good look juke had it for him and then a fall out had be to go into ,when she had her have school be a new power thing to kill off her lover she get took out and kill off ,when Naruto had sit on his thore chre he then had others too be his new wife like she hulk the red one a gril name terra he meet into the badlands when he had tok over it from susike and ion the king andQueen of it ,when the had sex with each other rroo,

when nartuo starfire blackfire had took over the old couny buit it up Naruto had the ships move to the old city by the bay and Naruto and both his sisters had buit a home too