That was cool maybe do one where they all have to get a blood test that would be really cool

I Love It, You should defenatly writte another one

Aww poor James! I loved it! Write more pleaseee!

Amazing! I love it! :D

I love this story! You wrote it really well! :D

UGH! SO CUTE ALL OVER! You know how I write long scrawling reviews? I feel like this one might be short... I mean, I loved everything, but little things. Little loves. So, unless I went line for line telling you what was awesome, I don't know how else to do this. SO! I VOW TO DO MY BEST TO CREATE AN AWESOME REVIEW FOR YOU DESPITE ALL THE MINI THINGS I WANT TO LIST!

First, the story. It was awesome, simple as that. I love how Kendal sets the tone. "mysterious" is the word you used, and it was PERFECT! And I love how Logan put his arm around James, and pulled him back.

Second, I liked how Carlos didn't remember, cause he definitely wouldn't remember,you know?

Third, the Backstory (this one has no order, I'm just writing it as it comes to me). It was so sad, I nearly died! It was so cute. James is cute! I loved how aweful he felt about the whole thing and it was adorable honestly.

Fourth, James. James was sort of OC but in a James-ish way. Like, it's unlike James to be scared, but you wrote it like it WAS unlike James to be scared. For instance, instead of saying "James was freaked out by needles, you wrote the fourth paragraph. Simply perfect. He wasn't acting like James in a normal way. That probably made no sense but there it is.

Fifth, the whole thing with them on the couch. I love how you write those moments. Where, they're close like that but it's normal? It's so adorable cause that's really how it is (doesn't it pain you to think that it's a show and not real sometimes?) I also love how you write about how comfortable whoever the main character is with the other guys. It's so perfect.

Sixth, I love the pillow throwing. I always love pillow throwing, as you now know. I can see their faces when they throw them too. Good times, bro.

Seventh, I love the Kendal speeches. They are so Kendal-y and leader-y. It all fits into place and works. I do love them cause they bring depth and helps you remember how close they all are. Plus it totally brings out Kendal's character.

Eighth, I love exasperated James.

All in all, awesome work! If I had any complaint, it would have to be not enough Carlos. But that's sort of bias cause I just love him. Technically, then, it's not even a real complaint so I'm free to say "NO COMPLAINTS!"

Loved it :D

This was adorable! Write more about his past exsperinces!(sp?)

aww that was sweet. His friends will always be there for him. Its kinda funny. On fanfiction authors always write them closer than they show on the show. You know like they were there for James when he freaked about the needle. But in the show they ditched him. Its just kinda funny. But anyways you should totally do the story explaining everything.I loved the story. :)

aw, this is such cute/sad story! Poor James :( But it was great and very well written!

ha! i loved it

Yay! I love this story! I have an irrational fear of needles too(this story didnt help much,cause i have to have blood drawn tomorrow)! And airplanes. Anyways,this story was really cute!