Reviews for The Effect of Venom
Melancholy Chords chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
Whoa. It's April 5 today!
Okay, so anyway: I only started watching Kurojitsushi yesterday and am on season two, but this fanfic really stands out to me already. You've captured the personalities of the characters immaculately, and all of the scenery is just right, not overdone or just barely touched upon. All in all, despite being a newcomer to this fandom, I have to admit that this is one of the best stories I've seen amongst the rabble, other fandoms included.
~Mel
uu49824x chapter 3 . 7/30/2015
please update
Midnightmadness7 chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
It's been quite a while since you've updated this, but I hope that you continue it eventually because I found this quite interesting and very good to read. I really wanna know what happens! You're a great writer and I hope that you will pick this back up one day. Come back to us, deary!
ragdoll.scarred chapter 2 . 11/10/2013
I was quite eager when I started to read your story, the idea appealed to me greatly. When I read the author's note to this second chapter I was even more excited to see what would happen. I am a great lover of literature and the English language, as well as literature from other countries. While it's not too hard to find works that are entertaining, finding works that I believe are truly well-written by true artist are harder to come by. I find there is a great difference between good story-tellers and good-writters, one not always being dependent on the other. So I a looking forwards to more from this story, and will patiently wait for more updates.
I usually do not review individual chapters, preferring to wait until I've completed the full work, however, I found myself oddly wanting to give my support, letting you know how much I have enjoyed just these two short chapters, and perhaps give you a bit of assurances that, I for one anyway, am happy to wait for more chapters if they are as well written as these last two. I especially liked how you added in such well-thought out bits that fit so well with the original story and characters. The two civilian letters and Ceil's responses, such typical 'Ceil', as well as the fact that Ceil doesn't appreciate art, I felt that suited him. The way you used true crime stories from the time-period, like the original author, I found these things to be enormously pleasing. It actually reminded me somewhat of a book I read, it was about a poisoning of a Dr., in the late 1890s, called 'Death On The Priory'. Perhaps you heard of it, its been a few years since I read it, I may have the info a bit off. However, something about your work jerked it to the fron of my brain, and I thought it would be interesting to see what you would do with that story if you combined it with Kuro. and Ceil Phantomhive and his dark, demon butler. It would definalty be worth reading I think.
Anyway, I am going to finish the chapters you have uploaded, I may or may not feel the need to review again, I probably won't if I feel it would just be repeated praise. We shall see!
Thanks again for your work! Good luck with your school, or perhaps you have finished now? I don't know when you posted this. Either way, good luck to you. (If you have finished school, you should be posting more! ;p )
Modern Venom chapter 3 . 10/29/2013
Hurp Durp. I'm wonderin' how this is gonna' end? Can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
leeluluirty chapter 3 . 2/11/2013
I really enjoyed this! I hope that you will continue XD Please!
WhoAteMyEnchilada chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
Y U NO FINISH?
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
update
grell lover chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
OMG! Yay! You added Snake! :D plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz finish this!
DeathMeister23 chapter 3 . 8/18/2011
T~T Where's the next chapter! Why did you have to make a cliff hanger! AHHHHHHH! Next Chapter!
silentwolf38 chapter 3 . 8/3/2011
This is a great story please update!
xFang's Angelx chapter 3 . 7/19/2011
Please update soon!
starsinjars chapter 3 . 7/7/2011
thanks for the story! and for that lady whose name escapes me. that was interesting... maybe it will be mentioned in the manga? xD i can't wait to see if this was like an assasination plot by the snake guy whose name also escapes me but i know who he is xD can't wait til next update! :D
MistressNerd chapter 3 . 6/6/2011
So glad this is updated! I can't wait to read more!
isthisparadise chapter 3 . 6/3/2011
I really like this story! Especially when Ciel got bitten! I can't wait to see what will happen next!...I also can't wait to see why Snake made Emily attack Ciel...I will eagerly await the next chapter! Keep up the wonderful work!
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