Ah... Get Ed, how I love thee so. This is a good fic and I like it that it is about Bedlam (who by the way was the best/funniest/scariest villian ever!

It would be awesome if you did the same things for the other characters as well. Like Fizz's Pi symbol or Burn's Flame or Ed's Skull. (Thouhg why Andy Knight gave such a young and innocent hero a terrifying and sinister symbol is beyond me). Keep up the good work and LONG LIVE GET ED!

I KNOW WHO I AM TOO! :U

The thing about this one-shot is that I like how one half of it describes the events taking place and the other part is dialogue between characters. :D

By the way, check if allows quotations from other people. I don’t know it it’s allowed or not.

Here’s something you can fix for your writing, so it can be precise without writing much:

“Like all courier companies, the employer's and employee's had to have pseudonyms or nicknames to avoid identity theft and other such legal matters.” (“Employer’s” and “Employee’s” don’t need the apostrophe since it’s plural and isn’t talking about something they possess; “had to have” could be changed to “needed”)

“However her boss's one struck a chord inside her.” (Comma after “However” because it’s a transitional word)

“She could not do anything about the situation now, if she abruptly stopped Bedlam would be less angry but nonetheless suspicious and would consider her untrustworthy.” (She could not do anything about the situation; if she abruptly stopped, Bedlam would be less angry, but nonetheless, suspicious and would consider her untrustworthy.)

“"N-no Sir, I am just asking as to why you chose such a name for yourself" Kora said her demanding tone now softened.” (Comma between said and her because they’re two different ideas)

“Bedlam paused; he collected his composure and placed his hands behind his back as he stood straight.” (Comma between composure AND and because they’re two different ideas as well)

“"Kora, do not bombard me with such meaningless, babble!"” (Remove the comma between meaningless and babble)

“"Do you want me to delete you?" He contradicted once more. Kora did not reply and Bedlam turned away and headed for the door.” (Comma between reply AND and because they’re two different ideas)

Insane Asylum huh? That would explain a lot of things. A short story but you know the saying, short and sweet.