I want a sequel!

Waaaaa so sweet but sending Joey to jail is so sad

Poor Ryou and Marik. I hope this turn out alright

Awwww happy ending...i hope

Geez Seto is crazy

Oh a fight for love who will win the war

SETO YOU ASSHOLE.

Damn people and their cameras.

Oh no...your crush finds your love filled notebook..not good

Awwwwwww!

Myah~! Myah~! Myah~! This is one of the best stories I've read on this pairing so far! No joke! My only critique is that the beginning felt a lot more interesting then the ending although I still very much love this story~! :DDDDDD

It started off pretty cute, but it just became super cheesy and predictable.

Also, it seemed rushed, like it all happened too fast, and there was generally a lack of detail.

It was okay, but the cheesyness was the worst part.

you story was great

I would read the sequel well if I find it sorry but I don't like to put anybody in author alert or favorite author sorry

well great story

laters

u.u i admit i liked it

also sequel would be good .-.

I love all the "WAIT A MINUTE!" moments.

"Wait a minute, I have new information that will turn this situation into a favorable manner!"

"DENIED."

"Wait a minute, I also have information that will turn the situation into a favourable manner!"

"DENIED. AGAIN."

"YOU'RE DENIAL IS INVALID FOR I TOO HAVE SOMETHING THAT REALLLLLYYYY TURNS THIS SITUATION INTO A FAVOURABLE MANNER!"

Love. it. Less than three.