| Reviews for Living in Time |
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   Kallen21 chapter 19 . 7/14 The really like your story but you keep repeating a lot in it |
| AnimeAngelOfTheNightSky chapter 20 . 7/15/2019 Great story but very repetitive Also I’d love to read more please update |
| lizbeth chapter 20 . 6/6/2017 me gusta tu historia, por favor actualiza después de leer no te preocupes por la carpeta al final de cuentas estarás recordando y podrás escribir de nuevo:) |
| Crimson Strings Of Fate chapter 21 . 4/8/2017 Please update I love it |
| Wren210 chapter 10 . 4/8/2017 didn't know youkai mated so young... shippo was about 7 during the anime and 2 years have past so he would be about nine in human years wow way to go... |
| Wren210 chapter 9 . 4/8/2017 question... how is it that Kagome is a super miko with great knowledge, speed, agility in just 2 years... why and how did inuyasha and his clay pot mate have so many pups, when both InuYasha and Sesshomaru were both of single births... how is it that the clay pot came back to life she was dead with no corporeal body of her own as it was cremated so she was reduced to ash... |
| Morgean chapter 20 . 11/11/2016 This story would have been great but there was repeated paragraphs with slight changes, copy and pasted paragraphs and repeated details that could have been shorttened unneeded information, no major plot except kagome roaming and lack of character development. But keep up the good work and not to repeat a lot of information the reader read the first time. |
| dbunny66 chapter 8 . 9/21/2015 I started reading this story with great interest. The plot itself is great. But... I guess English isn't your mother language. There are a lot of mistakes in your story. You repeat parts of your story way too often. And I don't really get the time line... for example kougas pups. How fast did they grow? I got the feeling when reading that between giving birth to his heirs and her return to them only a few weeks went by. The part where she assists the pupped wolves is a bit confusing. Here comes what I really like about your story: the idea about kagome feeling a pull is great. I also like it how she can defend herself. I'm on chapter 8 now and so far kagome only went or rather raced from A to B and then raced on to C... I stopped now here on chapter 8. I hope you rewrite the story some day and I'll start reading it again! Don't give up! |
| SaiyaCat chapter 18 . 8/12/2015 Please UpDate Soon |
| lia.a.karas chapter 20 . 12/29/2014 Please do continue writing your stories here. I am a very big fan of the seskag pairing and you are doing a wonderful job. If you wanna write elsewhere your novels please dont completely abandon fanfiction. You are an excellent writter and it would be a shame for your stories to dissappear. I believe you can do both even if you have fewer updates... Please keep writing here. |
| FantasyWriter345 chapter 7 . 12/18/2014 does she always eats an apple when she gets up? Good story by the way! |
| Fairy Flame Key chapter 19 . 8/23/2014 I hope you update soon! I love your story! |
| munford chapter 19 . 7/29/2014 Aww so cute. Keep up the good work. |
| Shi No Mo No Tenshi chapter 19 . 5/18/2014 please post another chapter soon! |
| BellaLovesEdwardMoreThanJake chapter 19 . 4/25/2014 come on i think this story deserves a sequel. |
