You know I have never felt so hurt and sad after reading a Twilight fanfiction. This fanfic and there's another one named Soul Collector are the best ones that I have ever read.

I promis I will try that was. Sad still crying

Don't downplay your poetry, it was amazing. Better than anything I could do. Sad but amazing one-shot. Thank you for writing it.

God u made me cry and I never cry when I read a story. I know exactly how it feels to be alone and I see some people like this at my school. I thought people were snobby for making funof them. Thankyou for this. Now I know to lend a helping hand and be friends with everyone. Great story. Bye and continue with the writing;)

O My God! you wrote that story so beautifully, i was crying at the end of the story. and about you're poem, i think it didn't suck at all, but a great one. i do have a little question: can i translate your story to my own language? i think everybody needs the chance to read this story because it is so amazing.

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This is the first thing I have ever cried about on fanfiction. It was beautifully written despite how sad it was. :)

Oh wow, that was so so sad, but beautiful, beautifully written! I've still got a few tears in my eyes.

Thank you for writing this, bullying and consequent suicide is such an ugly state of "normalcy" nowadays and more needs to be done to help kids being affected by it. So, good for you for writing this and getting the message out there that "Bullying is NEVER ok". Everyone has stuff they're dealing with and sometimes all it can take to lighten the load is a smile or a quick "hi" and you can really make someone's day, even if just a fraction of a bit better.

i don t think i can stop crying ps i liket your poem

I cried so hard.

And yes, I agree, bullying is a serious problem that needs to stop.

Thank you for this wonderful story.

How do you do that? Seriously? It's amazing!

I'm crying .

Edwaaard! '(

Beeeella! ;'D

It's amazing! I LOVE YOUR WRITING!

This story is very beautiful. It's really nice to know that there is one person out there where ever they may be who cares for the outcasts. I'm bullied at my school. I have an account on here, I was going to write something like this but to scared. This story needs to spread to everyone so they know the effects of bullying. It's not pretty. I like that fact that Bella is there for Edward when no one else is. I wish there is some one out there for me. Bella is a true friend. Unlike my so called friends who would like to hid me in a closet, but having someone to sit w/me when I'm alone at lunch would be nice unlike everyday at lunch my friends don't save me a seat at lunch even when I ask. Edward is so alone and empty I'm glad he had some one who cares when know one else did even tho he killed himself. I'm sorry what happened u school. Nothing like that has happened yet to my school. I know next year to were purple on the 20th for bullying. Thank u for this inspiring story. It gives hope to the bullied that some one cares.

there were tears in my eyes as i started to read this and i already know where you were going with it, i loved the fanfic as sad and heartbreaking as it was, good work

The poem was beautiful. you did an amzing job! it made me cry

Jordan

My God, this was beautiful. So true about teen bullying. Me and my friend have gone through it and its nice to see that not all teenagers are heartless. I litterally cried, which is a pretty difficult thing to make me do. I can't even tell you how muh this story touched my heart. It was well written and amazing. Great job.

Oh dear! This was so sad and tragic. It is just horrible how many kids are pushed to commit suicide. Your story portrayed that perfectly. There was no happy ending for Edward and Bella, because he was pushed to the end of the cliff. However, bella's company was like a parachute on the way down, protecting him from too big an impact. However, he still drowned in the water, and that is the saddest part. What a beautiful story about love that should have always been, but can never be. Due to the sick, twisted minds of some very uncaring soul-less monsters! I think we can all agree that we shed many tears during this saddening tale. Kudos to you!

p.s. I am TERRIBLY sorry for what happened at your school! Feel free to P.M. me if you wanna talk to someone abut it!