yusuke leaving keiko made me a little sad, for the both of them, but seeing yusuke so much happier with hiei and kurama and not in a destroyed relationship made me much happier!
your characterization is great and fun to read!

Ahhhh! the both of them with him so hot!

I loved it that was the best story ever please continue! XD

I love all these Trifecta one-shots, so far this is my favorite. I like Keiko too, but it seems like if Yusuke did stay with her, he would never have any Makai adventures ever again.

I'd love if they were all organized together in one story!

I honestly have no problem with Keiko either but sometimes I think its best if Yusuke and her stayed friends you know? For the majority of the series I've seen Keiko as more of the nagging, older sibling type. And Yusuke does seem to have more fun with his guy friends anyway. xD

Yay! They are finally together. I've always thought that the team had a special bond and it translates very well into relationship. I would be easier if this was all one story and you'd probably get more reviews that wall.

Yes! I want to know how this ends!

woot~ *waves a flag with hearts printed all over it* OwO

Put them all together please it's a bit tedius going through your (at present) 57 fics for the next one. :/ I love your fics, but it's a pet hate.

(LOVE THIS SERIES SO FAR!)

I love it! It was amazingly written and everything I love everything about it!

Finally they got together

Been waiting for this moment. It's worth the reading

I think the three of them are good together, too, although I also actively dislike Keiko...

And as I said when reviewing part 2, I DO think you should combine them into chapters of the same story, as they have ceased to be stand-alone as you claimed your first two were.

:) I liked it.

I do think you should try to combine all of these in some way, they read more like individual chapters in a longer story, much like Little Wonders. But it isn't the end of the world if you leave it like this, you can always dictate their order in the summaries.

Heh. Hiei pointing at the menu and telling Yusuke to "make this" is so Hiei. And I would so ditch Keiko for Kurama and Hiei anytime. I mean, she needs to accept Yusuke for who he is and constantly compaining about how she wishes he wasn't a demon, or that things could go back to the way they were is belittling him. It's like a direct shot to the gut, no wonder he left. Kurama and Hiei want Yusuke for himself and have no wishes that he change, there you go.

And rambling over. The short version is that I love this, I love your writing and I can't wait for more (like an OT3 lemon OH YOU SHOULD).

i think ive said this before for one of your other oneshots, but as someone who pretty much cant stand yaoi, this is one of the most believable yyh cases of it. hope you continue it!