A well written piece. I liked it.

Beautiful story mate!
A courier boy named Kuzon? *wink*
Have a Wonderful Wonderful day!

I read the sentence, "Still, he'd been trained and recommended by Kuzon, the former Grand Lotus," and for a couple second I was just thinking, "When did that happen?" and then I remembered the old man from the last chapter, and my mind was blown.

Fantastic. Zuko in canon was wily at need, so responding as he did to the murder plot Ozai was hatching with, of all people, his daughter, isn't that hard to imagine. After all, I can't imagine child Zuko attacking Ozai even if it wouldn't have been suicide.
Seeing how the war affected ordinary people could have drawn him to the White Lotus, so that also fit like a puzzle piece to create a picture that, with his reunion with Iroh, was wellnigh perfect. (It stopped too soon!)

This fic is SO SWEET! A lovely AU with an ending that made my heart sing :)

beautiful

I just sifted through a ridiculous amount of crap to find this story. I read it once years ago and now found it again!

This is sweet.

I love this AU! Please continue!

Ow. Alright. I didn’t need my heart anyways haha. Nice writing!

Iroh pov was so heartbreaking! And omg, Kuzon was the old near-blind man? *gasp* How did I not see that before? I figured he was high up in the organization (or that members recruited new members... idk), but I didn't guess -! So cool.

Woah. Nice! Very cool! Your writing swept me up and carried me along and I loved it!

So good. So, so, so, so, so good.
Thanks!
—Yuki

So beautiful!

I read this some time ago and thought it was truly beautiful. I found it again years later and have the same opinion.