Ok, crazy crazy Nanoha. Honestly quite hesitant to read the 'dere' fics but this is good!

really liked this, wisk there was more of it.

Nanoha...this is your true colors! you're a monster!
Lke your brother...Johan Liebert...
Cool Story , make more!

It's been a long time since I read a yandere fic where it's not just played off for humor or used as an excuse for torture porn. This one was just nice and creepy.

yay yandere! i like it if fate's the cul
prit, but nanoha...i can't imagine it, so i was hesitant to read this, but then i thought, maybe it's not as bad as it sounds, and i was right, it was actually pretty good, but again it would have been better if it was fate.

Good work, but (nearly) all the "its" should be "it's". Just saying.

Well done! Ah, this is just the perfect way to write a yandere.

If you can read it and get the image the eyes-wide-swallow-your-soul bloody-grin-you-can't-get-away yandere face, you've done it right.

I don't know about the bolded "Nyahaha," but hey, different styles, right?

It looks like I need to read all the rest of your fics now. I mean, you write yanderes so close to how I do, and you are obviously into yuri, and you've got other stories which are yuri but not yandere... I have a lot to read~

Also, I'm going to prod you in a direction to make your tastes even more like mine: Get to know the Vocaloid fandom. Even if blank-slate characters aren't your thing, there are enough existing characterizations to draw from (in fics or even some of the better-known songs). Vocaloid yandere is funfunfun, and sweet innocent Vocaloid is great, too.

So yeah I'll stop now

...D8 SIGNUM! i'm lost for words...the 'depth' of Nanoha's 'love' disturbed me and the fact that you were able to portray this so well also disturbed me. so overall i reckon this was a job well done. GOOD JOB (-_-)b

i like this dark and scary setting of nanohas dark love for fate and she would do anything just to get close to fate. I like to see a continuation of this story if its ok because i wanna see what happens to fate when fate gets all caught up in this.

(respond to me how you feel k)

You do like it dark don't you. It was well written but still not my cup of tea. v_v Well on to more of your stuff. *_*

I like it, but it terrifies me. This is what I believe is called literary masochism.

So it's Nanoha's turn here..to be psycho..well..I always jump the M-rated scenes but not the killing and stuff, which must also be the M-rated one but...you know what I mean...wooow...crazy..really..she killed signum..I can't imagine that she would be able to put that off..I always see signum as someone who's strong..and nanoha a kind person..wow...this is new..XD hmm...I wonder...if what signum said are all true?Is fate really like that here?Hmm...

I like this version better, but both of then are kinda sad.

I hope I can see happy one next time.

deliciously creepy! i absolutely loved it! haha

...you know, you almost write that too well... lol too bad signum had to die...

it would be awesome if you were to make this a series!

Oh god I actually love you! This is so cool.

And I agree being, Yandere suits Nanoha a little...too well ahaha x