You really should start writing more faberry stories damn they are good

This is an old story so you probably wont see this but here goes anyway,

This story is ok, but the constant introduction of unnecessary tension is cancer its self and Quinn's intimacy issues are enough tension on their own. You could even have explored the ethics of a doctor and her patient falling for each other and that struggle there cause that is more realistic. There was No need for the Beth accident, the Quinn insulting Rachel to get her angry (unprofessional btw), now some misunderstanding of how Quinn sees their relationship. Rachel is in entertainment and has not dated a woman according to the public, so the answer Quinn gave is the right one and Rachel would be ok with that without having to have Quinn explain it and not throw a temper tantrum. This is just another version of the falsified tension the author seems to like to bring which is quite unnecessary in a story with pre-built in tension already.

You are a decent writer , you just need to take out that habitual need to increase stakes and stuff in your stories. Drama and angst should be natural to the characters and the plot not be escalated unrealistically by the author. You had a very good premise and a good paced story in terms of the developments between the characters, but the unnecessary drama is really off putting. I'll finish the story cause i've come this far but in your future stories, try to minimize the unrealistic and unnecessary drama.

I love this story, perfect pace and very moving. Really fun to read! Heading to sequel right now!

That was fantastic, I'm looking forward to the sequel.

YAYYYYY! there aren't enough decent faberry fics out there! but thank you for writing ONE of them!

I couldn't handle the angst in 'Meant To Be' so I decided to read this again for now (I'm just waiting for Meant To Be to be completed before I start reading again because my heart can't handle it, I want my happy ending already lol!) :) I really love how you write faberry and the plots are always very interesting. Off to read Mercy, Pity, Peace and Love now :)

Just discovered this story, great job. On to the sequel!

wonderful story!

Great story. Was an enjoyment to read, looking forward to the sequel

Can i say i love you ? You make me cry but that was so good. So thanks for this perfect moment !

Wow! Amazing idea! I enjoyed every chapter of it!

Im so happy that Rachel is now healthy and that they are together! Love it, great job!

Loved this story. Absolutely terrific!

You're a very talented author. :)

I liked this story very much and look forward to reading the sequel.

Thanks for sharing! :D

damn, now i need to read more...

okay, not that bad a passtime xD keeping my fingers crossed now ;)

okay, hoping they got the hint, onward!