m'kay I think you should do a hot, steamy yaoi fic. But add a twist of humor and have the three servants walk in on them in the middle of it. Or better yet, have Grell walk in! if you ever writ this, please notify me and give me the title of the fic. have fun if you choose to write this story for me, sweety~

i love ur story! even though i dn't have account please update soon!

This story was really cute! o

I know that this story says that it's complete but I defo think you should write a sequal with Ciel finding out that they know or something xD

Anywho, nice work! :D

what the hell! hahahaha! i love it! ..

sebastian is like, the affectionate one. hahaha. i am really shocked to the turn of events that sebastian let those three. hahahaha. I really like the story. you should write another, you're a good writer. ..

Heey nice one shot. About your problem, maybe you try a story 'bout Ciel gots catears and -tail. Sebby love cats, right? :3

greets!

Fuchslady

love this Ciel in denial and bold Seba-chan ...

Nice

Make sebby a super badass gang leader and ceil something like a childhood friend he looks out for

Good! chapter two, plz :D x.

Pretty good... Sebastian and Ciel were a little OOC though.

And one more thing, since this irks me to no end (I don't blame you. You probably watched the anime first or something) :

THEY ARE NOT JAPANESE. Ciel, Sebastian, the whole cast (save Bard, who is American, and Ranmao and Lau, who are both Chinese) are from the Victorian England era. They should not, for any reason, be adding Japanese honorifics to each others' names and talking in Japanese (hai).

The only reason I mention this is because I see this too much in the fandom for comfort.

Good work for a first fanfiction, though. It always takes a while before anyone can write each characters' personality correctly, so don't worry about it.

Not too bad for a beginner. Sebastian and Ciel were a bit OOC, not just because of their relationship; I am a SebaCiel fan myself. Sebastian wouldn't sit on a table... Still good, though. :)

this is so cute. i love it please make chapther 2

You're good at making stories ya know : )