| Reviews for A real kiss |
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   pleaseforgetthisaccount chapter 1 . 9/22/2012 Ahh! Soooo cute! |
| DevilishBea chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 Soooooooooooo cute! This soo should have happened. |
| fake fucker chapter 1 . 1/19/2011 I like your fic I hope you'll write another chapter or another fic soon . :D I love the kiss part xD BYE BYE |
| Confused chapter 1 . 10/26/2010 "Of course." Yana grinned. Some mistakes make it ambiguous. The Above statement is one example. This is said by Fai in the fic. However, by adding 'yana grinned' behind makes it seem as if yana was the one speaking. Thus the fic is confusing in that sense. Work hard on your writing, and you'll get better soon enough. |
