| Reviews for The Tales of Bella Lumic |
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   Kassi1989 chapter 66 . 10/2/2019 Very interesting story. well thought over plot. I like Bella very much. She s kind, smart and interesting character. I was worried about her all the time I read your fanfic. Relations between her and Doctor is so cite, pure and bright. You did Jack awesome. Only one thing upset me very much: she locked a door so her father could not escape. I was hopeing that they will arrest him , not kill. Poor Bella. It is very sad ending. Anyway I like your fanfic very much. Thank you for it.))) |
| Ian Dugan chapter 2 . 12/18/2018 You have a typo where Bella and Dylan walk into the music room you say, "Dylan cave her a wink..." It should be "Dylan gave her a wink..." Overall good story. I've just started and will continue reading. Ian |
| kiwisdream2 chapter 48 . 3/23/2016 This story is just great so far! Some bits of dialogue and narrative are a bit clunky, but coming across a fic with original story lines instead of just rewrites is great. The relationship between Bella and the Doctor is good too, since it isn't rushed straight into romance. There friendship is wonderful, and Bella herself is very likable, as well. I'm still curious about the business with her father. Can't wait to see what's next. |
| Falling Right Side-Up chapter 18 . 10/10/2015 I love this story so far. I'm so glad that you've been revising it, and hopefully we'll see a new update soon! |
| Sherlockian chapter 14 . 6/9/2014 Daym, we seem to have figured out a few things for the future already. 1. That the ending series episode will have something to do with John Lumic 2. That they will go to Vienna and 3. That they will probably meet Harriet Jones. So many clues, but was that girl dead? I mean, she said that her hand was deathly cold... (I'm talking about that woman who warned Bella) -Me |
| Sherlockiab chapter 4 . 6/8/2014 I hope this is also supposed to be funny, because it seems like it. -Me |
| Loveless150050 chapter 38 . 1/14/2014 Ohh she got attitude |
| Loveless150050 chapter 36 . 1/14/2014 500 years! Wow she can live a long time. But let's hope longer because the Doctor does not die from old age, not from what I know of. |
| Loveless150050 chapter 20 . 1/14/2014 Hmm I feel a good mystery the second impossible girl haha |
| Loveless150050 chapter 19 . 1/14/2014 Aww happy ending |
| Loveless150050 chapter 8 . 1/14/2014 Dun dun dun! It's addicting to keep reading! I just can't stop now! |
| Loveless150050 chapter 4 . 1/14/2014 I love Bella's character! Very smart but fun |
| Loveless150050 chapter 3 . 1/14/2014 May I ask if Bella is a time lady or just a companion. |
| Loveless150050 chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 Make sequel! ️️ |
| jacob black999 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013 I love this story so much, you have a talent in writing |
