Oh my...

Well, I, of course, love(d) it :3 You write well, which I am thankful for, and the idea is nice. At first I though that Vero was an evul person, but I guess she's not. I'm happy about that~

Thank you for this chapter! :3

Interesting Fic Hun _ I can't wait to see what happens _ UPDATE SOON ya know ya wanna _ _ _

love peace and chocolate _ _ _

Blessed Be _ _ _

Cazzy _ _ _

aw i hope Roxas is able to hep Axel once he find out she left him. /

Can't wait for the next chapter, i definitely love this story :)

Yay she's leaving. Poor Axel. Can't wait for the update :)

aw i was really enjoying this. i do hope yu come out with a new chapter ]

Love it love it love it love it! 3

Please continue as fast as you can, please~? :3

AW NO!

New chapter please?

Update soon lol

This used to be sai-is-my-lover I loved the chapter more soon please :)

Yays! I really like this one! Keep on writin'!

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Hello! I'm HellzLittleAngel, your new stalker- JUHVJKSDVNSDJK I meant reviewer! ; Coughcough.

Okay, so this is my second time trying out this review, because the first time I was ABOUT to send a REALLY long review, and you know what?

The INTERNET went down! So I lost all words that I would send you to chapter two, and so here I am, re-typing this review! Sucks, right?

ANYWAY Poor Roxas D: I just wanna hug him and tell him everything's gonna be alrighttt~ I'm kind of in the same situation with one of my best friends, and she's the same gender as me ' It sucks so much. (I feel your pain, Roxas!)

Axel you asshole! He's so damn oblivious to Roxas! If I could, I would smack some sense into that stupid redhead! I mean, really! How could he not notice Roxas's deep, sorrowful love for him? Pigheaded, I say.

Ew. Veronica.

Okay, yeah, I know I shouldn't really judge Vero, because the story hasn't really gone into what she's like, but damn it, she's stealing Axel away from Roxas! Although I do see why Roxas doesn't hate Vero as much as Kairi and Namine. I mean, I barely know the girl - how can I really hate her?

Speaing of Namine and Kairi, I'd just like to tell you one thing.

Epic.

Okay, yeah, so Namine IS out of character, considering in the game she's polite and quiet and innocent, but with every story you read (guilty as charged.), Namine is ALWAYS the same. Nice, sweet, innocent. It's nice, fresh change to see she's got some goddamn backbone! (Excuse mai French, hurrhurrhurr) And Kairi. Yeah, she's a bit OOC too, but personally, I think it fits her. Even though I hate Kairi. Only Heaven would know why.

Hmm, have I covered everything? Yes? Well, then I have a request for you; a note from the Lord himself.

MOAR.

Yus, that's what the note says. "Moar". So, gather up a drink and a blanket, open that computer, and TYPE :D

- HellzLittleAngel~

This sort of behavior is extremely OOC for Kairi and Naminé. It also perpetuates a highly offensive stereotype about bitchy women.

This fic is mysogynistic.

Wow, this is a really good story! Please, do continue.

Wow! This seems like a really good story, please keep writing!