Ohhhhhhh, now McCarthy sees the mirror, and maybe now will he believe Hatter? And poor Alice still in the hospital bed like that :( Update soon please!

Yay! I'm so glad that you updated this story! Maybe all my secret mind tricks worked ;) good job, yay!

McCarthy seems to be slowly sarting to believe Hatter. At least there at the end.

Wow! And the plot thickens...

Beautifully written so far, and I can't wait to see where you go with this!

P.s.

Langley? Hmmm...

Okay this is awesome! Thank you for writing it! Can't wait till then next update!

I'm so glad you updated.

I'm so glad that you're back! And congrats on getting promoted! Anyways, eeeek for the way that you left it! I hope that everything will turn out to be okay :)

Omg! Poor Alice and Hatter! I know it had to be connected to Wonderland. Grrrrrrrrrr

Wow! Talk about intense! Oi! Hope the dective believes them..probably won't..but a girl can hope! More soon please!

Well he knows now! Somehow that is the reaction I expected from him! LOL! Good job! More soon please!

Yay! Thank you for forcing yourself to write and making Alice tell him...finally. The evil laugh makes me think um...not too good things. Oh no, what are you planning?

Oh wow! She's pregnant! :) Aww, a little Hatter baby! Loving this!

[With Love]

~Ashley Marie~

My goodness Alice what a way to tell Hatter about the baby and that guy seemed a bit creepy.

Finally! Hatter deserved to know! And now they both can work together. They are so much stronger with each other.

Oh, yay! So glad that you're back with this! And...you leave it on a semi cliffhanger...why? why? Can't wait for you to update so we find out more! :)