No, Ciel was not OOC at all. Even though this was merely a dream (that was cruel and unexpected!) he tried to convince himself that he didn't want this, wanting Alois both to stop and not cease his ministrations ("the taste of Alois's mouth is intoxicating, sickening" - I loved that part).

I love the atmosphere you created and your prose was brilliant. I can imagine Ciel being really preoccupied with constant thoughts of Alois, so having a dream like that could very easily happen. Well done.

It was hot.

I felt this could happen between All is and I. You are correct I'm not a pervert, but I have had a dream similar to this plot

What the fuck

I loved it! But could you add a few more chapters

Haha I really enjoyed that especially because it was ciel's dream

Wow atta boy alois

Omg that was so cute!

Nice job

There are no words for how awesome this is! You're an amazing writer, and I love how you kept both Alois and Ciel so perfectly in character. It just worked out so wonderful.

Y u no do lemon... sad face

OMG I THINK MY HEART JUST DIED MID-SQUEE. That was REALLY good!

This is the best thing I've ever read and it literally had the best ending.
"As he fells back into restless sleep, he tastes the faint flavor of cherries and wine lingering on his lips."
UGHHHHHH

This was really well written. I liked it a lot. Definitely one of the best fics out there no doubt. You're a really great writer.

Uh...peeps who like claude x alois or ciel x sebastian this is 4 u:

U guys r pedophiles. Only alois x ciel is good becuz they r around the same age. Sebastiand and claude r adults so stop being pedophiles u creepers!

Loved the story!