Reviews for Seashore |
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Elise-chan chapter 1 . 4/8/2010 Hi! what a nice story! I fished it while poking around and I had found it amazing! how beautiful descriptions! and I love geology (if I hadn't studied pharmacy it will be my choice). so, thank you for the story, I spent a wonderful time reading it goodbye Elise-chan _ |
drana0 chapter 1 . 1/13/2009 I liked your story, too bad it's just a one-shot. I'd long to read more. Everyone was in character, plus your writing style was very accurate, grammar and spelling was perfect I suppose. Keep this good work up! |
tragicomedy chapter 1 . 5/6/2003 That was a great fic. Nice an dlong, too! I learnt a lot of interesting stuff which was really cool, too! |
ladedaaaaaaaaaaaaa chapter 1 . 9/20/2002 It was pretty good, but what peeves me (*A LOT*)is that Zelgadis is too out of character...whatever happened to the 'mysterious swordsman' we knew? |
Bethuns chapter 1 . 6/2/2002 THIS was what I was waiting for~! After being hurled into the Slayers (and AxZ) fandom in the last fourty-eight hours... After aprox. thirty or so fanfictions, most that lightly treaded on the rating of 'mediocre'... You, my friend, have given me a wonderful gift. I was able to feel, and just BE there with them.. You created a lovely picture, and I'm very grateful to you for it. You're a wonderful author, and I'm looking forward to reading more! -Seii- |
kitty chapter 1 . 5/5/2002 oh that was a nice friendship fic, i liked how you put the bracelet thing into the story. |
elffromspace chapter 1 . 5/3/2002 Ohh, what a lovely little fic! Very well written and sweet! |
fish chapter 1 . 4/7/2002 that was sooo good! A fresh story on the bracelet. I also coulndt stop gigeling when I thought about lina and gourry finding the blueberry patches _ keep writing! |
Elanya chapter 1 . 3/30/2002 Hey, your sis showed me to this! I'm very glad.. It was a very sweet story. Like many of the other comments said, it was nice to see a story where the romance was not carried to out of character-like extremes, and where Zel's angstiness was also not exagerated. A nice relaxing little trip to the Slayer's world. Your geodes give you away, though, Mr. Geology PhD ;D |
ameliaseyruungreywords chapter 1 . 3/29/2002 omg...i Loved this fic! i do! i live it! i couldn't stop saying "AWWWWWWWW!" it was great! . |
kaerra chapter 1 . 3/27/2002 Wow, you really nailed the characters' personalities on the head here! Your talent for description is amazing, and you set the scene amazingly well. Shame you're not a creative writing major... _ Please don't ever stop writing, no matter what you end up doing with your life! _ |
Luna1 chapter 1 . 3/26/2002 Absolutely beautiful. _ One of the sweetest fanfics I've ever read. Zel and Amelia were written so perfectly...it makes me want to watch the ending to TRY again to see the bracelet scene. *sighs* |
Saler Vamp chapter 1 . 3/23/2002 ! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ! -Bye |
Saler Vamp chapter 1 . 3/23/2002 ! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ! -Bye |
Razelle chapter 1 . 3/9/2002 Oh my gosh! This is honestly the best romantic Slayers fic I've ever read. It was so sweet and so REALISTIC! This is one of the few A/Z fics I've seen were they were both in character. I really loved this story, and I hope you write more like it |