You've done justice to this brilliant film, with characterization, voice and emotional tone all spot on.
You've created a believable, complete "afterlife" for these characters through careful crafting of dialogue, subtext, and action. I could see and hear them clearly within the world you created for them. Thanks for this excellent, polished work.

I just saw the movie again, today, and I adore the interaction between Smith and the lovely Donna, this feels like a natural, fitting ending to the movie.
Heck, seems like they're not too old, little Oliver would shortly have a little brother/sister to grow up with.
Excellent little one-shot, thank you

loved it sooo much ... i saw the movie earlier but wasn't connected to then nowadays i am going through a lot of fics and urs was really wonderful ...

Great attention to detail BTW

I saw this movie yesterday and today I was wondering if maybe someone write about what could happened to them next. Honestly I didn' t expect much and was pleasantly surprised when I found this.
Yours stories are perfect. Happy, in character, but not too sappy. Love them both. Just brilliant. Thank you very much.

Greetings from Poland.

I'd hate to have to be the one to break it to them that since kids pick up their accents mostly from peer interaction, he'll probably pick up the accent of whatever part of America they're currently living in.

Wow! This was good/great. I really was able to see the characters in my mind as I read your story and it gave me a sense on completion to a movie that is one of my favorites :-). Thanks to your story, I can see Oliver and his family living the rest of their lives happily together, with the occasional butt kicking when needed.

This is the second time that I have read this story and it is as good as it was the first time. thank you for putting a good story in a little used catagory.

Awesome story

Why in the world are there not more reviews on this story? This is a very good story. It has a good grasp of the characters. All it needs to be perfect is a little polish. Good Job!

I have to say that I LOVE this fanfic. I love how you made Smith and Donna, hell even Duchess in character! Usually, I don't like little ficlet fanfics but I really love yours. Keep putting Shoot Em' Up fanfics that I'll continue to praise and love. :)