more please?
But first of all a lot of grammar and spanish I think, faults in them. Check it please and then it's even more awesome. Cause the idea is super :D

interesting...

It's great. I would love to read next chapters:)

waiting for more!UPDATE!

This is awesome, please continue soon! :)

_, but the story isn't completely translated

Barney is my most favourite of all!And thanks to the author,he has been potrayed really nicely!Luv it! :D

Lol, Im liking this story so far. update soon![:

Right, still liking the plot bunny and when I think of the characters and what you've got them saying I feel that you portray them very realistically.

Now the positive crictism (I mean only to be kind!). There are a couple of lines that haven't been translated, although with very rusty skills I can get the general idea. There are a number of times where punctuation does not always occur at the end of the line. And for me the dialogue is fantastic but you've got to be careful with the lack of attention as to where they are, etc - get a little more detailed with their surroundings.

Keep going strong, I am really impressed with you writing the first chapter that you translated into English and that you have faith in your brand new translater. S/he has done a fab job. :-)

Let me know if you want a spelling/grammar beta.

Here's to crossing fingers that Robin and Barney actually *do* get together! :-D

- G.

aw lol cute

Looking forward to more, and to see what Robin is planning!

poor robin

cant wait to read more

This is quite interesting! Looking forward to more!

awww

Oh God, such a well translated story... I wonder who is the magnificent girl that did this ;)))

Tu ya me entiendeh ;)