Its too bad this story is unfinished. It was so well written and I loved the connection Alistair and Zevran were having.
Perhaps you could get a spark going and try to finish it. I am sure most of us would approve of that.
Good story and excellent writing skills.
Shrimpy

Oh my god I could sob for Alistair, Zevran too, but mostly Alistair. Please post another chapter soon!

I truly love this chapter. The understanding and insight you bring to the characters is beautiful. I hope this becomes a very long story because I really don't want it to end any time soon.

I found Sten fascinating in this chapter. You have a gift for the unusual.

I love the interaction between Alistair and Zeveran. Your writing style is fluid, graceful and delicious. Looking forward to the next chapter.

there must be another chapter ... please write another chapter ... with a happy ending ... and a happy Alistair/Zevran moment.

There must be a happy ending or all hope is lost.

I'm loving this story. I can't wait for Ch. 8. I'll just be over here chewing my nails.

This chapter was fabulous! I loved awkward Alistair, confessing Zevran and the hurt/comfort. Zev with Connor and then the banter with Alistair afterwards was very enjoyable. The whole chapter covered a range of emotions and was very well done.

Excellent story and well told. I am looking forward to more.

And your age on Alistair is surprisingly accurate...almost.

I asked David Gaider to clear up the confusion and answer a question: How old is Alistair? He says he's supposed to be 21 years od...20 is close enough.

i love zevran's responce to any emotional closeness, that mix of flighty and want.

this is a wonderful story so far, i cannot wait to see how the pair come to terms with the actions of fade-zevran.

oh poor Alis...

That was hard, and heartbreaking, even though I knew this chapter would come eventually, but it was very well done. Linking the dream with an actual bad memory worked very well, it really made it feel even worse. I felt so sorry for Alistair, but it was Zevran that got me all misty-eyed... I'm really glad to see you're continuing this, and sincerely hope it means everything's all right for you!

Wow, this was...really moving. And a little disturbing of course, but that's not always a bad thing. Zevran's (the real Zev, that is) reaction to all of this is great. I love how he recognizes Alistair as being 'his soul.' So sweet.

wow, go Sten :-)

oh poor Ali