I just loved your fanfic. The plot was simple enough, but the way you portrayed the storyline was exquisitely detailed and delightful to read. You know you are reading a good story when you start sympathizing with the characters. I could feel Wolfram's pain and sufferring. I was consciously rooting for the Great Sage to figure everything out before it was too late. I absolutely loathed the imposter. I could feel the tension when Wolfram was ultimately called for trial. And the whole idea of Yuri and the "Maoh" merging - superbly brilliant!
Good job!

THIS IS SO COOL !
THIS IS AWESOME !

And basically Gen fic ! (or were you intended this fic as Gen?)

I can see this as Canon !

But poor Wolfram. He was being used again and almost die.
And wow, Maoh here seems like different person from Yuuri. My Headcanon is Yuuri and Maoh are the same person.

Oh well, it was still Amazing fic !
Love when Murata investigate things.

Excellent work. I have nothing but praise. I am sorry I am very lazy.

This was a wonderful story and I can't wait to read the sequel!

This was an interesting fic. I liked how Murata and Josak figured out that Wolfram was an impostor. I enjoyed the subplot of the waistcoat. I'm only sad that the real Wolfram didn't receive his gift from Yuuri. I liked how you had Yuuri and the Moah meld to save Wolf. I have a soft spot for an ill Wolfram and scene of Conart scooping him up to carry him was adorbable. I also really liked King Jaida, she didn't fall into the Mary Sue catagory. I think I liked her from the beginning before she didn't outshine Yuuri and Wolfram and seemed supportive of thier engagement.

Hey! Nice adventure! Vic enjoyed reading the whole chappies you wrote. Thank you for sharing!

What an amazing story! I've just recently got into Kyo Kara Maoh and Wolf and Yurri are so adorable together!

I loved how you had Wolf in peril, but yet he wasn't totally helpless, and that Yuri/Maoh saved him.

Excellent writing, pacing and plot. Every minute left you on your seat and I thought your grasp of the characters was fabulous.

Thanks for a wonderful read!

Huh? No it can't end there! Oh NOoOO

Stupid council!

This is really good!

*hugs you* This was thoroughly enjoyable and the perfect distraction from my worry over Wolf in your other story. haha but not for long because I already have him in my thoughts. See! You write so brilliantly, it sticks with you and leaves a lasting impression, even without the violence or rape, this story has staying power. Bravo _ You leave us too with the potential that there is more to be told and you kept so well to the all the characters it was like watching the actual show playing in my mind, with just the right of amount of progress on Yuuri's part on opening up more to depth of his feelings for Wolf.

Yay! You have other stories to tied me over and get my mind of of Wolf's misery and pain in the other story. _ ha! keep fighting wolf!

speechless That was BRILLIANT!

Very interesting plot and the characters were very realistic-much like themselves in the actual KKM story. I can actually see this happen in the anime(if they had continued it)! Excellent use of vocabulary, by the way, and the descriptions were very vivid!

I love the way you write, and I hope to read more from you!

Aww, this was awesome :) Short and neat plot, very cute :D So keen :L I love how you kept it real, when, like, I'd exaggerate the big dramaaaa bits :L It was good! Keen on the jackets, although I still can't picture them ; (and I want to be a designer, bloody hell :L) Why do you call Jaida a King? :S that's the one thing that got me. What happened to queens? :S She's also...very nice and friendly, and I'm suspicious even though I know I shouldn't be :L And Murata and Yozak... What babes. Love how you worked them :) And Wolf! Actual babe and a half. He's just fabulous. Let us love him forever. And your charming story. When I first saw it, it was just one or two chaps, and I thought it was some engagement story, like with Wolfram not walking out he stays and looks at rings because of the title you know... So didn't read it :L But I was bored and gave it a chance, like, yesterday, and I love it! Fab :D

i highly enjoyed it. Although the ending did intrigue me... It there going to be a continuation?