Time to re read this!

Nooooooo

This looks very familiar... I might have already read this. But that doesn't matter! I'll just read it again! Yay! :)

im comfused. naruto has told sasuke he loves him. why is sasuke upset that naruto hasnt said that he loves him? why does naruto say that he wants to be 100% sure that hes in love with sasuke before he tells sasuke? i know for sure that they've said i love you to each other but in chapter 18 both characters act like they havent said those words yet.
i love this story alot but this threw me off a bit.
still love the story though! keep writing!

I saw in your profile that you plan on eventually rewriting this. It will be cool to see what you end up doing with it. I think this story could change in a lot of interesting ways given current canon and how much of it you want to incorporate. Like if you set the fic after the current ninja war arc, the deaths of Kakashi and Ino would have a different, even sadder impact. (Their deaths would be like Kakashi joining Oito and Rin - assuming Obito dies, and Ino joining Asuma and her father.)

Personally, I liked the last arc because I thought it brought both pairings to a good close. Sakura and Shikamaru both needed to get over their heartbreak, and Sasuke and Naruto need to figure themselves out. It made sense to me that, with all the trouble Sasuke went through to get Naruto to realize his feelings, it wouldn't be smooth sailing even after they got together. Naruto needed some time for his feelings to catch up to Sasuke's. Admitting he was attracted to Sasuke and wanted to give him a chance isn't the same as saying he loves him. I hadn't considered Shikamaru x Sakura before this fic (I almost always see Sakura paired with one of her teammates or Lee), but now I feel more open to it. They were like the "brains" pairing of the fic while Naruto and Sasuke were the "brawn."

Good luck with the fic. :)

This is a good story so far so keep up the good work.
Well till next time Later :) Jinto22

Dual pregnancies, I love it! (No reason either one has to go through the shame of pregnancy alone. They can each be shamed!) The last nine months must have been hell with them both having aches and pains. ;)

Great fic! :D

Naruto asking Kiba if he wanted to join them was SUCH a perfect comeback! Canon Naruto would totally do something like that (instead of weeping and blushing like a stereotypical, pathetic uke. You know, the kind of character he's totally NOT, except in fanf. :P )

ShikaSaku seems like such a natural couple: genius x genius. It's really too bad that most fanf writers (and especially Kishimoto himself!) forget about the fact that she's actually super smart! Ah Sakura, such a character of wasted potential. I like that she's smart and a capable ninja in this fic. And that she's all of those things without being a MarySue. She's not perfect and still does some stupid stuff, but she's trying. This is the character she could have been if Kishimoto had given a crap. :/

Kakashi dead? I didn't think the knife would kill him

Gotta be honest, Naruke and Sasuto are the worst fucking names for Naruto and Sasuke's children I have ever seen in any fanfic, ever.

What were you thinking.

Loved that they both got pregnant at the same time XD I've never seen that on this site before :) great job loved it from beginning to end

Mm... Mpreg-ing... Got to love it. And I did.

It was a really nice story. I liked the build up and the clueless, reluctant Naruto (that's my favorite type). The ending was rather unexpectedly funny. However, there were two glitches in the story. The first was the time inconsistency; the time mentioned in some of the chapters and the events were a bit confusing to me. The second was the cliched naming of the children; it would have sounded much better had you used 'Saito' and 'Naoki' as the names for the children (these are only suggestions), instead of 'Sasuto' and 'Naruke', these latter names don't even make sense. Sorry if the criticism was a bit too harsh, but I hope it is constructive to you. You've got good potential, so keep up the good work.

Wowies ur writing really does change lol but I love it just the same! Great job with the kids names at the end it adorable! Do u mind if I name my kids that?