| Reviews for Lone Star |
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   Abaire chapter 3 . 6/6 This fiction is almost a decade old and you may not even be on Fanfic anymore. But I want you to know these are very well written. You capture the characters very clearly and present what feels like a realistic portrayal of prairie life in Texas a hundred years ago. Enjoying this story! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/11/2019 Just reread this. I am a Texas girl born in San Antonio. Raised in Fort Worth. Retired on a small ranch in Loving Texas. Which is 45 miles south of Wichita Falls. |
| Just Sus chapter 7 . 6/19/2019 Sometimes, I just want to read a good, old-fashioned love story, and this was it, for sure! Thank you for sharing these two! |
| blondferretgirl chapter 7 . 1/18/2019 Love It! |
| marymary123 chapter 7 . 10/28/2018 Enjoyed the story. Thank you Ps I am Texas Grandma |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2018 The first thing that bothered me was that bella said something really stupid about this trip making her turn into herself, like closed off. And I was like...thats a weird thing to say. Second, they are traveling in a wagon...its been raining for three days straight and yet they haven't gotten stuck or lost a wheel? BLESSED LOL The constant blushing is just annoying. You really don't have to tell us that shes blushing every 3 lines. She just gets to town and BAM shes already agreed to court someone? Talk about fucking moving fast holy cowboys! It's too fast, slow it down geez. Then Edward threatens some men away from bella and she gets all weird talking about "that's no MY ranger". Like she even knows him at this point. And really? Shes crying over it? Would she prefer a man to have asked those men to politely leave? Seems to me that a women back then would have preferred a man that could protect her...like he did. But you have her fucking crying about it? Honestly at this point there isn't much I like about this story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2018 So, the second thing Edward ever says to her is "I have no reservations that you can take of yourself miss". ". . .take of yourself . . " ? I'm a bit worried for your story if you have such glaringly obvious grammatical errors in a pivotal part such as their first encounter. |
| 2caughtup chapter 7 . 6/6/2018 Just Love, love loved this sweet story! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2018 Thank you for a lovely story. |
| neelix lee chapter 7 . 12/7/2017 Thank you for a sweet story |
| mounds01 chapter 7 . 9/23/2017 This was a great little story! |
| Lanigra25 chapter 7 . 5/31/2017 I love a virtuous Edward. Wonderful story! |
| Burning4Peeta chapter 7 . 5/15/2017 Awww, why did it have to end. That was such a sweet story. |
| maggiejoma chapter 7 . 5/11/2017 wonderful story, thank you so much... |
| twimima7 chapter 7 . 1/5/2017 Thank you for writing this beautiful Family love story. I enjoyed reading their life and cried happy tears for them. True to words, Life keeps moving on for me too. |
