I do love the characters, but I have two issues, which have been brought up in other reviews: Beta and Sigma

Beta is revealed in season 10 to be Tex, and Sigma is much different here than in the show. I suppose I could wave it off as AU, but it bugs me nonetheless. I still like the idea.

This is really good fanfic and thankyou for being another who thought up this option I was kinda pissed how in red vs blue they just killed off all these characters like that ounce I thought about it

I AM VERY ANNOUED RIGHT NOW BECAUSE THETA OS NOT FEAR HES TRUST ALSO HE IS THE CHILDISH ONE OF THE GROUP NOT ZETA THETA AND THETA ONLY HE USES FIREWORKS AND SKATEBOARDS AND HES A CHILDISH AI WITH THE EMOTION OF TRUST TRUST TRUST

plz continue this is great

You know, Zeta is like a fragment of Theta. You probably already got this, a lot, but meh, felt like saying it too.

Why isn't beta Tex?

I love this so much the OC's are great the story is brilliant and I agree we need more fic's like were so many feels in this the poor AI's they really do deserve so much better.I really hope O'maley is okay despite being a mean angry AI I felt really bad for him.I can't wait to get started on the sequel XD.

Why is Sigma female? Why isn't Beta TeX?

Other than that, this thing is awesome.

I bloody loved this. I'm glad for this 'what if' story. I really miss O'Malley and Theta and Delta, so I love this idea, especially since Church/Alpha had to start facing himself and his other parts.

As for the OCs, I knew Iowa was shifty from the beginning, but somehow you redeemed him regardless. Which I will admit I like because the Ada/Iowa romance thing is adorable. As for Ada, I do like how well she turned out. I didn't dislike her character for a moment, especially with how she interacted with the AIs.

Nice job and now to the second story!

I like how you got Theta, the most childish AI in the canon story, who represents happiness, and made him fear.

Omigosh, this was intense! I cried during the chapter about Delta and York, and this ending left me breathless! Absolutely great! I can't wait to start the next one! :)

wow :O

I am very very very confused.. I like your writing and the story, but the confusion in the AIs makes it hard to is Tex, female. Theta is the pink one, trust, not Sigma. Sigma, while literally, flaming, is the only clearly Male AI, besides Gamma. The rest look like freelancer suits, so its hard to determine gender. I do like the idea of a Zeta AI. Wash did say there were more AI where Epsilon was kept, Zeta makes sense. I also like your Beta. I can relate a lot to him. This really is a great idea for a story though! :D

aww! you're really good! I was not confused about which AI was talking! Is Zeta an OC? or did you mean Theta? :)

Awesome.