Awesome fic. Those two were tortureing each other for nothing. Are you planning on writing more fics about this simultaneous mating cycle? It would be interesting to see what happened to everyone else.

Haha awesome work I was so amused reading this

More please this is getting good to be put on hold.

I'd have loved to have read the part with Starscream flirting with Prime. It'd been epic. XD

Ha! Does that mean there's a fic with Starscream after Optimus? O.O That'd be so awesome!

:DDDDDDDDD

do you have more that thing about starscream and ratchet sounds like a next chapter or something.

... hehee. Angst. Delicious, delicious angst.

OH. MY. GOD. I GIVE UP.

I LITERALLY CANNOT RIGHT NOW AND I THINK MY BRAIN HAS JUST GROUND TO A HALT WITH THE INSANITY OF THIS STORY.

Yes, this was good, this was awesome and dear Primus I'm laughing so hard right now xD

Like it so far, keep it up!

That was really cute (and hot) I never really saw Prowl as one to avoid a topic of importance, but with his situation I can see it being a viable excuse. Poor Jazz must have been so confused, then BAM kisses and fleeing. It's always a good way to build up anticipation in a story and it never gets old. I really enjoyed this story, it was very well written and within character.

I've been reading your Transformers stuff for a while and I have to say I love your stories :-). This was so sweet and Ratchet's little rant at the end was perfect. Hope you have a lovely day.

i wish you made this a series with different bots :)
i'd love to see what trouble the cons are going through :3
the silent soundwave who would he pick?!

So apperently I can only leave one review per chapter...oooookkkkkkaaaaaayyyyyy. So after reading a few reviews I realized you may have been hinting at Optimus prime/starscream. I am completely ok with this. Same question how many pretties do you want? Huh! Huh! Huh!