Reviews for Regrets |
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Miakotsu band of Seven chapter 1 . 5/29/2016 update please |
Athena chapter 1 . 3/9/2016 Maybe u can make another chapter when Alfred (or Francis or Gilbert) finds out or something like that? |
AthenaThePerson chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 Please please please wright another chapter I love this fic |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2014 This was amazing. I love how it realistic and how England actually feels remorse, while in most fics the rapist would just be cold hearted and cruel. I believe that if you write a second chapter (which would be really great if you did), then you should add a third party into the situation who finds out what happened somehow and tries to fix it. Try having it focus on not only Matthew, but Arthur as well and how he comes to terms with Matthew. These are just thoughts though, and you don't have to follow them. Keep writing! |
Insanity under the moonlight chapter 1 . 2/22/2014 It makes a pretty good one-shot so another chapter isn’t completely needed, yet I would still like some closure, the comfort for the amount of hurt. Some ideas I have are: A) England confronts Canada and tries to apologize and promises to stop drinking, Canada accepts the apology but their relationship is still destroyed yet Canada can somewhat function again. B) Canada’s government notices Canada’s been depressed and after consulting a professional, they realize he’s been showing signs of a rape victim and after keeping it subtle by Canada’s request, they find out it was England, they agree to press no charges or whatever but England still gets some kind of punishment. You can decide what that is if you want. C) France couldn’t keep watching England drink himself to death and tries to keep him sober, England refuses and after a bit of prying he confesses he’s now drinking to keep the guilt away for what he did to Canada yet he wont say what, France contacts Canada (at a meeting, over the phone, whatever) and notices how messed up he is, eventually he gets Canada to spill after a lot of work and is appalled at what happened. D) America goes over to where Canada’s sitting after a meeting to ask for a game of catch, he notices there’s something really wrong with Canada, tries to find out what’s wrong, Canada denies there’s anything wrong, America says he’ll always be there to help him or fix whatever’s bothering him, (the meeting room can be empty or still have some people there or whatever) Canada breaks down and asks where his hero was when he needed him and how he’s only noticed when people need something from him and how some people just take things that can never be given back, America lets him cry on his shoulder and takes Canada back home, after a bit of coaxing Canada tells him he was raped, America’s in shock then wants to harm or kill whoever did it, Canada wont say who did it, America settles for merely comforting him for now. To be realistic if something like this happened it would be impossible for a relationship to form so sorry to all the UKCan or mapletea shippers. |
QueenDooter chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 Please, do another chapter! That would be amazing. There is too much potential here! I think it would be awesome if a third person would be introduced and made it a love triangle! Yaaaaaay drama! |
Vievin chapter 1 . 10/13/2013 Woah, you'll update another chapter?! I would be the most glad. *-* |
Edon chapter 1 . 8/24/2013 Please make another chapter ;_; |
Another chapter 1 . 7/31/2013 Another chapter nao |
Overkill Cake Monger chapter 1 . 2/18/2013 Another chapter please! |
ACupOfMapleTea chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 How could you Iggggyyyy? Go and comfort him! |
EvilLemonDemon chapter 1 . 5/2/2012 Great story. I would verry much like another chapter of this story, maybe with alfred finding out, or arthur trying to apologize. |
Quinn fiberoptic chapter 1 . 4/17/2012 This is sad and really good. Please continue. this is one of those stories where its realistic, amazingly written, and just plain awesome. there's no other way to put it. Canada and England are so alike. there both broken and need fixed. Someone needs to seriously see what's going on and try help them. If not Mattie going to be depressed and Arthur going to drink him-self to death. The choice is up to you of course, but I think it would be great if you did. I love Canada and it makes me sad that that happened to him. gonna grab my shot gun and check all the pubs. it's sad true, but poor Canada needs to have an ending aside from thinking his alone and unfix-able! If you can't make another chapter it's fine because this is perfect the way it is, if you did I would love you! Great story non the less. |
permantentlyorphanedaccount chapter 1 . 1/1/2012 That. Was beautiful. And dark and angst and sadness and BLAHHH! *Melts* Please write more...? |
Canadien Lover chapter 1 . 11/26/2011 I will forgive you for breaking Canada my great and awesome nation If you write another chapter Please? If you don't I will send Russia and All canadiens after you Maybe even a polar bear or two |