Reviews for Breaking Through |
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scarlettjanee chapter 4 . 2/26/2012 pleaaaaase update this! i am dieing to know what happens! i love how michelle stood up to him and her actions, its amusing because i could see this happening. i love how you portrayed maryse aswell, just how i would of imagined her. randy and michelle are one of my favourite couples! please update asap! |
nothereanymorek chapter 4 . 3/18/2011 Cant wait for the next chapter. |
veroniques chapter 4 . 10/14/2010 this chap is grat! but...how can michelle just...walk away! he's too beautiful!*_* anyway...it's so nice to see something different about the relationship between chelle and maryse. All people show them as enemy, so is great for m to read a story where they are friends! Ryse try to teach cody french is so funny! ahahah please upload soon! i need to know what appened! and i need more randy/chelle!)) kiss! |
Hollywood Scarlet chapter 4 . 10/10/2010 Favorite chapter so far! Randy and Cody appear to spend a hell of a lot of time together. (: Aw, why is Michelle being so stubborn, Randy f*cking Orton is apologizing and she just walks away. T_T HAHA at Maryse trying to teach Cody French. Hm, I wonder what Maryse has planned for when Michelle gets to the locker room. I wonder if she'll even go there. Update soon, seriously, I want to know what happens. :D |
Hollywood Scarlet chapter 3 . 10/10/2010 Loved the match, you got all the diva's movesets perfectly! Oh no, looks like Randy has pissed off Michelle, that can't be good. :D Great Chapter. :) |
veroniques chapter 3 . 10/6/2010 omggggggg! i'm so excited about this story! i love it! and you write so f* well! i cant wait to resd next chap! please up soon! luv! |
Dangerzonex chapter 3 . 9/27/2010 Woah who ever thought michelle will stick up to randy..the viper AWESOME! lol Update Soon! |
likexaxstar chapter 2 . 9/27/2010 Great Update of course. I'm really enjoying this story. I loved the Ted and Maryse part, it was cute and quite amusing. update soon? :) |
jessbynature chapter 2 . 9/26/2010 well, casey asked me to read this story and review...and being the awesome friend i am i did just that :) i'm really glad she sent me the link to your story! its amazing so far! at first i saw michelle&randy and right away didnt want to read it but its amazing! legit, you are a really good writer. your chapters are long, something i always try to do but fail. update btw, thank you for the review in one of my stories. :)) ~jessica |
xXCandimcCoolXx chapter 2 . 9/26/2010 I really like this story! Your style of writing is intriguing! I cant wait to read the next chapter! Hopefully Randy will come as soon as possible into the story!) Cant wait for more!;) |
Hollywood Scarlet chapter 2 . 9/23/2010 Awh, Jason was so sweet. And you put a some Teryse in there as well! I think I might faint, they're so cute. Amazing Update, I need more! :D |
likexaxstar chapter 1 . 9/22/2010 I didn't know you were on FFnet. hahaha. Anyway, Your story is freakin' auh-mazing, Marnie. Your writing is so in-depth and emotional. I need more! :D Plus, I love the original couple you've used (Michelle/Edge) but I can't wait for Randy/Michelle. xx |
Hollywood Scarlet chapter 1 . 9/21/2010 Marnie, this was so good. You're an excellent writer. I can't wait for Randy to be brought into this story. :D Keep updating, please don't give up on this fic. |