u need to make her stronger

This story is very disjointed. Doesn’t really go together very well.

She’s an idiot. Pure and simple. Why is she allowing someone to treat her like she does Freddy? . Also she’s constantly saying everything is her own fault and treating it like it’s nothing. It’s very annoying.

omg HOW CAN YOU LEAVE ME HERE WITH BIG CLIFFHANGER

eric is overprotective for his maker, were they a lover once?

i miss godric so much

oh hahaha a game changer is coming!

if she is going to revenge, i would love to see it, her dark side, im glad you wrote this oc to be a human who can be both dark and light, be both savage and cute ,and hilarious and adorable, i love the slow burn between godric and lacey that you putted in. I love that she lied so good, most of the ff make their oc bad at lied and i think a bit cunning and good at lying are more interesting

she can be strong, savage, and hilarious, god i love her! and i love when she talked back to eric 'anything that your non existed heart desired'

no it wasnt badlol, totally good, i am enjoying it since first chapter and i think i maybe finished this fiction in one day lol

Good beginning.

Please upload the sequel!

Please please please please please please please please please please put up a sequel! I love this its awesome!

im liking it

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