Cute.

wow i'm breathless!

Very good! I wish you were writing for the show! Lafayette is my favourite!

I loved this story! You captured both characters beautifully. This really added so much in terms of understanding both Lafayette & Jesus. I could very easily understand where both Jesus and Lafayette were coming from. You captured the fear within both characters very well, and the flow of their conversation was both realistic and necessary.

I wish the series took the time to explore their relationship like this. I wish this story was longer, but here's hoping that you will further explore the characters in future stories. You did an outstanding job.

Wow. This was amazing. They are my favorite couple on that twisted show. :) this was so dark in the best of ways.

Just wonderful, thank you so much. Very skillful.

Realistic. Great work.