I love their love. It's subtle but strong. Really, it was a great fic to read. Thanks!

Very nice story. I had a few complaints, but I can't remember them. I'll have to remember to look at that other story

Etsuko kinda makes me think of Ty Lee on caffeine. This was an interesting twist; I really should have expected it, given how perky and bubbly the waitress is, but the fact that Bee had to show herself and the readers that the girl meant nothing by her kisses made the realisation much more interesting.

Heck yeah, Smellerbee! That was the most epic thing ever. I'm not talking about revenge; I'm talking about the last line. It was so powerful and placed perfectly. I'd be interested to find out Iroh's opinion of Bee's plan...

Little jealous Bee is so cute (even though she would hate me for saying that)! I absolutely love the way you portray Iroh. He's so...Irohish, if that makes sense, and perfectly in character. (I probably sound like a broken record, but it was so good I had to say it twice!)

I really like this so far, and while I loved the fluff, I'm glad to feel the story start moving. Iroh is perfectly in character; I can imagine him sealing any deal with tea!

Your portrayal of their relationshipis excellent. It's very sweet and very adorable. And so very them.

I loved this. Smellerbee's such a strong person, and people don't give her enough credit for that. And I really like how she and Longshot just fall into step with each other and balance each other that. You did a great job of emphasizing that. Well done.

Beautiful story. I absolutely loved it! :)

This was beautiful

OOOHHH MYYYYY GOOOSHHHH i just like spazzed out right now. i freakin LOVE Smellerbee and Longshot. they are so freakin BEAUTIFUL TOGETHER. great story bro!

ive fallen in love with this these two, they're funny and they have balls. anywho, love the story, its awesome).

This was lovely, and I enjoyed all of it.

The romance was perfect because it was understated, and I like that.

Your storyline seemed kind of aimless at the beginning, but you tied it together well at the end. There were a couple of spelling errors too, but we all have those, so it's not a big deal.

Overall, great story. One of the best I've read in this fandom.

I love this story. thank you so much for writing it.

ooooooh i loved it