| Reviews for Hollyleaf: Tigerstars Revenge |
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   Screamingcrows1 chapter 1 . 5/27/2014 Cant wait! :-) |
| Shemiki chapter 19 . 2/14/2011 Remember, do a sequel, and reqrite this to make up for the bad ending. That was a good idea. In total, I'd give this story story between 6 and 8 out of 10. A Whole New World was an easy 9, possibly higher. |
| Shemiki chapter 18 . 2/14/2011 Two things. The M scene should be ages 17, not 12. (I'm younger than 17, and I read it! Only I'm used to that stuff on fanfiction.) Also, I know your bored, but this sucks, and ends way too soon. Not to say this story was bad, but A Whole New World was better. Do another sequel. |
| Shemiki chapter 17 . 2/2/2011 Okay, not including the rape, a good chapter. Including the rape, worst chapter so far. Bottom line: take the rape out. |
| LionJayDoveLVR99 chapter 16 . 1/29/2011 AAH!CURSE YOU WRETCHED CLIFFHANGERS! |
| Shemiki chapter 16 . 1/28/2011 Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... coulda been longer... |
| Shemiki chapter 15 . 1/23/2011 Very good chapter, but when she is in the Dark Forest its like "Welcome back Holyleaf." It's Hollyleaf. not Holyleaf. |
| Shemiki chapter 14 . 1/15/2011 I have to say you should get something going. These chapters are getting boring, no offence. |
| Shemiki chapter 13 . 1/9/2011 Pretty good. Buts its we're not that bad, not were not that bad. |
| LionJayDoveLVR99 chapter 6 . 1/4/2011 Go ahead, put uh, sex scenes in a T rated fic. There are many teen moms poppin up in the world. |
| LionJayDoveLVR99 chapter 4 . 1/4/2011 You got it from Lady and the Tramp, srsly! |
| Shemiki chapter 12 . 1/3/2011 Okay, first things first, its spelt college. Collage is a type of art. Other than that, good chapter. |
| warriorcrazy chapter 12 . 1/3/2011 When Breezepelt launched himself and got blocked, I laughed. :) |
| Fortunatewriter chapter 12 . 1/3/2011 This was a really short chappter! |
| warriorcrazy chapter 11 . 12/20/2010 Tigerstar |
