I believe this much more than I believe that all careers come off totally unscarred

I must admit, I was curious myself as to what lies underneath that particular mask

Interesting, relatable description of flavius. Chilling line about how he didn't feel human while he was locked up.

The weasel baiting was darkly funny. Well written deaths for Portia and the prep team, especially Rufus, whatever the reasoning behind his last words may have been.

I just finished re-reading Logically Speaking (the long story based on this one), so leaving a review here to say that it's still one of my favorite stories.

Wow, I love this. And the mish mash of Wiress thoughts about the arena, merged with the description of the market. It just seems so real and vivid!

Wow, I really like this, and for some reason. I found myself relating to Venia, yeah I like drawing and styling too. (I once drew outfits and coloured them in), and I'm a huge lover of hair. I like to restyle and decorate my hair and my friend's hair, kind of like what Venia does except to a lesser degree.

I like the view in which you portrayed her, sort of eccentric and intelligent and focused on the things that matter to her! Excellent characterization, and only in a few short words.

Also, it was the starting paragraph to this story that drew me in, absolutely spellbound!

This is another breathtakingly powerful piece. I love the format of this story, the sacrifices they made. It just shows how destructive the capitol is, and how hard the rebellion was.

Wow, I love how you built up all of Thresh's feelings and thoughts about the knife and what it resembles, so when you belt out the last line in the text, the meaning is clear and leaves an afterthought in the reader's mind, I can so imagine what's going to happen next, and the fury and rage Thresh must've felt and I don't blame him.

Ah, it's so sad and tangible...

OMG! This is just so heartbreaking!

I really like this, and the mood you managed to capture in this short script of writing. I saw your author's note, and I'm guessing whoever POV's this is in, is a self-insert of yourself? If it is then you did a good job of pulling it off, you made it seem perfectly realistic (as realistic as it's possible to get when writing a Hunger Games fanfiction), and I love the accent of the person. It creates a rough grubby feel to her personality, and sort of defines the hardship she's experienced in her life already.

Oh gosh. I LOVE this!

The highly philosophical view?
The repetitiveness of this narrative which just emphasizes the relationship between them?
The manner you wrote this so the average reader (who doesn't know much about philiosophy, like me) can still understand it?
The sayings?

Those are just some of the good aspects of this one shot, and it seems like Prim never really had a purpose of her existence other then to motivate Katniss to achieve some great odds. Heck, even her death had a purpose - to motivate Katniss. It's sad that Prim's thought of this way, and the line. "And the unhappiness of a few is worth it for the happiness of many. The many did not know Prim and could not be affected by her death."

Hmm, I wonder how many people exactly knew Katniss had a sister...

Wow, I like this! And snow's scheming!

I really like this!

And the theme of weasels and courage in this!

You know, this is one of these fics that are so good that I don't know what to say!

Hahhaah!

Pricelessly funny!